11 March 2014, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 220 Extrapolating Military Technology, Prepared Food Tactical Costs
Announcement: There is action on my new novels. The publisher renamed the series--they are still working on the name. I provided suggestions as did one of my prepub readers. Now the individual books will be given single names: Leora, Leila, Russia, Lumiere', China, Sveta, and Klava--at least these are some of the suggestions. They are also working on a single theme for the covers. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The major areas in warfare technology are:
8. Environments (personal equipment)
10. Morale (discipline)
Tactical costs are food, fuel, ammo, and replacements. Most food on the battlefield isn't MRE (Meals Ready to Eat) or any other immediate combat food. Most food on the battlefield is prepared in field kitchens and served hot to the troops. I want to get into morale at some point in these discussions, but for now, let's just make the observation that hot food does almost as much for a soldier on the battlefield as a letter from home. A wise leader will make certain the troops have good food and lots of it. When I have been deployed, the most important part of the day was breakfast, lunch, and dinner. It breaks the monotony and gives you something entertaining to do.
Usually the food gets to the mainline troops first and to the leadership second. This is an important concept in warfare. A wise leader makes certain all of his troops are fed first. There are many things the wise leader does to ensure the morale and support of his mean. Good leadership (and sometimes a hot meal) means the difference between a bullet in the back or a bullet in the enemy.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
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