Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 908, Publishing, Learning to Write, Reading and Sales

6 October 2016, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 908, Publishing, Learning to Write, Reading and Sales  

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:

1.  The initial scene (the beginning)

2.  The rising action

3.  The climax

4.  The falling action

5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my 26th novel, working title, Shape, proposed title, Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, is this: Mrs. Lyons captures a shape-shifting girl in her pantry and rehabilitates her.

I finished writing my 27^th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  

Here is the cover proposal for Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si.  Essie is my 26th novel.

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28^th novel, working title Red Sonja. 

I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 

Scene development:

1.  Scene input (easy)

2.  Scene output (a little harder)

3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)

4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)

5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)

6.  Release (climax of creative elements)

 

How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

 

Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

 

These are the steps I use to write a novel:

 

1.      Design the initial scene

2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)

a.       Research as required

b.      Develop the initial setting

c.       Develop the characters

d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)

3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)

4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)

5.      Write the climax scene

6.      Write the falling action scene(s)

7.      Write the dénouement scene

 

How do we get someone to buy your novel, and how do you get someone to read your novel.  The chance someone will read a novel they receive for free is pretty low.  The chance someone will read a novel they receive as a gift is low unless they really wanted it.  The chance someone will buy a novel you wrote is low unless they desire it.  How do you make someone desire your novel?  It’s the same way you make someone purchase your novel.  It is usually the first page they read.  It is specifically, the initial scene.

 

Say I see a novel that interests me.  I examine the cover.  I read the front and the information on the back cover.  If I am interested enough in the subject of the novel, I open the novel to read the first few pages.  If the first paragraph is interesting, I continue reading to the next paragraph and perhaps the next.  If the words I read are interesting, I will buy the novel and take it home.  I will read the novel as soon as I can. 

 

I’m not sure about you, but I think my approach is the way 99% of readers select the novels they read.  This is why the open and read function in Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and other online booksellers is so important.  Let’s think about this—once a reader picks up your novel, the initial scene is what will make them desire to read your novel.  The initial scene is what sells your novel.  Within the initial scene, the first couple of paragraphs are the propulsive force that sells you novel.  This is why I write over and over, the initial scene is the most important part of any novel.

 

Notice what will happen if you have a prologue.  The reader might or might not get to your initial scene and paragraph.  I can assure you, unless you are the most amazing author the world has ever seen, they will not buy your novel because of the prologue.  What happens if your novel begins with a boring initial scene or with pages and pages of boredom and no action—same thing, people will not buy your novel. 

 

You must make your readers desire your novel.  Let’s look at that.          

      

More tomorrow.

For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:

http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com  

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Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 907, Publishing, Learning to Write, more Purpose and Sales

5 October 2016, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 907, Publishing, Learning to Write, more Purpose and Sales  

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:

1.  The initial scene (the beginning)

2.  The rising action

3.  The climax

4.  The falling action

5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my 26th novel, working title, Shape, proposed title, Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, is this: Mrs. Lyons captures a shape-shifting girl in her pantry and rehabilitates her.

I finished writing my 27^th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  

Here is the cover proposal for Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si.  Essie is my 26th novel.

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28^th novel, working title Red Sonja. 

I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 

Scene development:

1.  Scene input (easy)

2.  Scene output (a little harder)

3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)

4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)

5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)

6.  Release (climax of creative elements)

 

How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

 

Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

 

These are the steps I use to write a novel:

 

1.      Design the initial scene

2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)

a.       Research as required

b.      Develop the initial setting

c.       Develop the characters

d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)

3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)

4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)

5.      Write the climax scene

6.      Write the falling action scene(s)

7.      Write the dénouement scene

 

What is your strategy as a writer?  What are your goals as a writer?  The purpose for fiction and novels specifically is to entertain.  There is no guarantee that a reader will ever read a novel they have in their hand.  If a person has skin in the game, if they bought the novel, they might read it.  If you give it to them, there is little chance they will ever read it.  This is the reality of the market.  Anything that is free is cheap.  Anything that is free is considered the worth of its purchase.  People tend to not read novels that are free. 

 

You might ask, what motivates people to read a novel.  Like I wrote, if they have skin in the game, they might read your novel.  Generally, readers are attracted to novels first, in book stores, through the cover.  From the cover, they go to the back material.  This is why the cover and the back piece is so important.

 

For a web novel, who knows?  Usually, the reader will not find the novel unless they are looking for it.  The looking for is part is based on the title and the novel information.  This is why the title and the basic information on the novel is so important.  Still, if the reader finds the novel in a book store or on the web, they might read the back information.  As long as they find it, and the information excites them enough, they will open the novel. 

 

In a store, they only need to pick up and open the novel.  On the web, they need to be able to look at the first chapter or pages.  The initial scene and many times, the initial paragraph is what might sell your novel.  So, to recap, the reader has to find your novel.  In a store, the cover must appeal and attract.  On the web, they must find the title or the information on the novel.  But, as long as they find your novel, the initial scene and the initial paragraph is what will ultimately sell your novel, and perhaps excite them enough to read it.           

      

More tomorrow.

For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:

http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com  

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Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 906, Publishing, Learning to Write, Purpose and Sales

4 October 2016, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 906, Publishing, Learning to Write, Purpose and Sales  

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:

1.  The initial scene (the beginning)

2.  The rising action

3.  The climax

4.  The falling action

5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my 26th novel, working title, Shape, proposed title, Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, is this: Mrs. Lyons captures a shape-shifting girl in her pantry and rehabilitates her.

I finished writing my 27^th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  

Here is the cover proposal for Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si.  Essie is my 26th novel.

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28^th novel, working title Red Sonja. 

I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 

Scene development:

1.  Scene input (easy)

2.  Scene output (a little harder)

3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)

4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)

5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)

6.  Release (climax of creative elements)

 

How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

 

Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

 

These are the steps I use to write a novel:

 

1.      Design the initial scene

2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)

a.       Research as required

b.      Develop the initial setting

c.       Develop the characters

d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)

3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)

4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)

5.      Write the climax scene

6.      Write the falling action scene(s)

7.      Write the dénouement scene

 

What is your strategy as a writer?  What are your goals as a writer?  The purpose for fiction and novels specifically is to entertain.  If this isn’t your goal and your strategy, then you might have a serious problem writing a good novel, getting a publisher, and having a successful novel.  I’m not certain what success is.  Writing a novel is a definite goal and success.  I already told you, you can’t really expect to be published until you have written one million words.  That’s about 10 100,000 word novels.  That is a measure of success in itself.  Publication is another degree of success, and I don’t mean self-publishing.  Anyone can self-publish, but recognition of your writing beyond yourself is a goal and a level of success.  To be precise, when a company or another person is willing to take a risk on the success of your writing, that is a true measure of success (and I don’t mean your wife or parents). 

 

The further measure of success is to have a book that is successful in the marketplace.  You have to go through the other wickets for success before you arrive at this one.  I’m not sure what this looks like other than with a best seller and sales.  If that means selling a million copies, few have achieved that.  If it means 100,000 copies, few have achieved that level too.  If it means 10,000 copies—is that during an author’s lifetime or a year.  In general, you might make $40,000 or $10,000 with 10,000 in sales.  You can’t live on that.  I can’t afford to stop working and live off my novels.  I have six novels in publication, but that doesn’t mean I’m raking in the dough.  I just want to get another novel published. 

 

The real problem for publishing and sales is the construction of the novel itself.  As an author, you learn quickly: it is one thing for a publisher to love your novel, it is something else entirely to get someone to pick up, buy, and then read your novel.  Think about this carefully.  To gain a book fan (someone who likes, buys, and reads your novels), they must find out about it, pick it up, decide to buy it, and finally decide to read it.  You can’t give away books, bad or good.  You can give them away all you wish, but there is no guarantee the recipient will ever open or read the novel.  That’s why sales is really important.  A person who puts their money on the line to buy a novel will likely read the novel.  You can give away boxes of your books with no assurance those you give it to will use it for anything except kindling.  There is so much more to this.         

      

More tomorrow.

For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:

http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com  

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