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Thursday, October 25, 2012

Development - more Tension and Release

25 October 2012, Development - more Tension and Release

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

If you have been following this blog, you knew I would get to this point eventually. If you have a focused theme, developed characters (with some storyline development), a setting, and a beginning, you have enough information to write the initial scene of the novel.

To develop the first scene, you set the scene, set the characters, then set them loose with tension and release.  Every scene must have a tension developer.  In my other blog at, I showed many types of tension developers and how to use them.  The main point here is that the plot of the first scene must envelope tension and release.

Aksinya is a great example of this.  The tension developer in the first scene of Aksinya is the calling of the demon.  Within that action is an element of danger.  The scene development focuses on the danger to Aksinya's life and soul by calling the demon.  This is the tension. 

Initially, the reader isn't certain Aksinya will conjure anything.  When she does, the reader now is fearful that the demon will harm Aksinya.  The release occurs when Aksinya is able to contract with the demon, and he appears to follow her orders. 

This is the basics of scene development.  Every scene must have a setting, characters, and tension and release.

My Notes: once you have a theme, you need to begin to visualize your plot, focus your theme, and define your characters. More tomorrow.

I'll move on to basic writing exercises and creativity in the near future.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:, and the individual novel websites:,,,, http://www.thefoxshonor,

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