25 May 2017, Writing Ideas
- New Novel, part x139, It’s Finished, Marketing
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher
has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy. I'll keep you
informed. More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com. Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy
them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in
installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in
addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel
was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and
tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this
blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll
keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production
schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the
writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage
of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a
novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2.
Develop a theme statement (initial
setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3.
Write the initial scene (identify
the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.
Write the next scene(s) to the
climax (rising action)
5.
Write the climax scene
6.
Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 27th novel, working title, Claire, potential
title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse. This might need some tweaking. The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis
accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization
and rehabilitates her.
Here is the cover proposal for Sorcha:
Enchantment and the Curse.
The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I started writing my 28th novel, working title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title School. I’ll be providing information on the
marketing materials and editing.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining
idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea
with a theme statement. Since I’m
writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 28: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the
X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns
about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 29: Sorcha, the abandoned child of an Unseelie
and a human, secretly attends Wycombe Abbey girls’ school where she meets the
problem child Deirdre and is redeemed.
First, you write and write and write
until you are competent and someone finally accepts one of your novels for
publication.
Second, you keep writing.
Third, you market. In the next few weeks I’ll go over my
marketing materials for a novel with you again.
I have to say, I’m better at writing than I am at marketing. I suspect some authors are really good at
marketing—more than writing.
Unfortunately, most of us can only stumble through the marketing doing
the best we can. You need to realize
that marketing is the only way you will get a novel published. You have to sell your works and be willing to
sell your works. I don’t mean by that
that you have to be willing to physically set up shop—you have to be the best
self-promoter your works have seen. I’d
rather be writing and that’s most of our problems.
You need a marketing plan. Whatever you do, you might as well plan it
out. I’ll give you somewhat of a
plan. It kind of looks like this, build
your marketing materials, and then market your novel. Both are very large parts to the whole. I can help direct and show you how to build
market materials, and I can help give you ideas on the marketing; however, the
actual marketing is where the rubber meets the road. Marketing any piece of writing is difficult. It has always been difficult. Even with a publisher, it is difficult. There are just so many authors out there who
are clamoring for each publisher’s attention, that the publishers can ignore
and do ignore most. They have the very
difficult job of sifting the dross from the gold.
The worse problem for publishers is
that they have to review or at least look at thousands of works from
inexperienced and non-self-aware writers.
I wrote and continue to write, until you have about one million words
under your belt, you don’t have the skills to write well. Publisher know this, but they confront literally
thousands of authors who have written a single novel or a few short stories and
who will not accept correction and criticism—so the publishers don’t. The reason you won’t get feedback on any of
your submissions, even if the publisher reads them, is that they your peers in
the past did get feedback and rejected it, didn’t give up, and the publisher
had to intentionally ignore them. You can’t
blame all this on publishers. They
ignore us because we won’t usually listen.
A real publisher who examines,
reads, and likes your work, will send back feedback that says what they like
and don’t like about your novel, but that’s getting to the point of
contract. In my experience, a publisher
won’t do this until they are ready to contract your work. There are too many good and experienced
writers out there for a publisher to coddle or give extensive help to any
author. You might see this for a
favorite or someone’s kid in the business—like the Dragon books poorly written
by that kid whose parents worked in the publishing business. For most of us, we are approaching publishers
and presenting our best material and hoping they will take the time to read our
works.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my
author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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character development, scene, setting, conversation, novel, book, writing,
information, study, marketing, tension, release, creative, idea, logic
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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