28 May 2017, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part x142, It’s Finished, Title
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy. I'll keep you informed. More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com. Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1. Design the initial scene
2. Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a. Research as required
b. Develop the initial setting
c. Develop the characters
d. Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3. Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4. Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5. Write the climax scene
6. Write the falling action scene(s)
7. Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 27th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse. This might need some tweaking. The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.
Here is the cover proposal for Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28th novel, working title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working title School. I’ll be providing information on the marketing materials and editing.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement. Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 28: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 29: Sorcha, the abandoned child of an Unseelie and a human, secretly attends Wycombe Abbey girls’ school where she meets the problem child Deirdre and is redeemed.
First, you write and write and write until you are competent and someone finally accepts one of your novels for publication.
Second, you keep writing.
Third, you market.
Fourth, you keep writing with the hope your marketing and your writing will finally come to fruition.
Fifth, you market.
Here is a list of the primary information I develop for a completed novel. I’ll put some explanation beside the sections. Eventually, I’ll fill them out for my newest novel.
Title of Work:
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse
Let’s start with the title. The title may or may not stay. So far of my published novels, my publisher accepted and used the titles I recommended. My publisher did ask me to name the Aegypt, Sister of Darkness, and Sister of Light series. I decided to call it Ancient Light, and the publisher was happy with it. My publisher also wanted a series title for the Honor series: The End of Honor, The Fox’s Honor, and A Season of Honor. My publisher liked the series title Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox, and they used that name.
From that, I’m five for five. I think up pretty good names for my novels. That may not always continue. I like to bend to my publisher’s judgement. They understand the market better than I do. I was asked at one time to suggest single name/word titles for my works in consideration. I did provide them with some justification. There you go—why chose a certain title for a work?
The title is a critical part of a novel. It is part of the selling and marketing. If a reader can’t relate to your title, they usually won’t pick up or look at the book. You need to have a title that interests and excites the reader. In the modern era, the title needs to excite and interest the bookstore patron and the web browser. Thus a novel title needs a little more than to be catchy. Catchy is good, but it needs to be searchable. If you search for your novel title, what comes up? Before you chose a title, make a search. If it comes back with not hits at all—that isn’t a good choice. If it comes back with a gazillion hits, that isn’t a good choice. If it comes back it a moderate number—not too many and not too few, you have a good choice. No hits means no one will find your work. You need to refine it better. If it is a simple one or two word title—not too weird a spelling, you might have a keeper. But I can assure you, in the current internet a two word or single word title will not come back with no hits—it can’t happen.
For titles, nouns are good. Simple descriptive nouns. A verb can work. If you look at my novel titles, you can see how unique they are. I still had to use the addition of novel for the websites. The web url is a great indicator of the popularity of a name or a title. Thus Centurion had to be CenturionNovel.com and Aegypt had to become AegyptNovel.com. My other novel titles were more unique.
So, on picking a title—a little unique, but not too unique. A little searched but not too much or too little. Not so strange that it isn’t easily found. There is more, and I’ve written more before.
L. D. Alford
Type: Either Screenplay or Book
Length: Either # of words for books, or # of pages for screenplays
Keywords and Market Focus:
Fiction, curse, sith, fae, fairy, seelie, unseelie, Sherwood Forest, Britain, United Kingdom, MI6, covert, spy, goddess, Dagda, military, training; will fascinate anyone interested in covert operations, enchantment, and the fae—will appeal particularly to those who enjoy spy, mystery, and suspense novels.
Author Bio: Approximately 120 words
The finest entertainment in literature is an escape into a real and inviting culture—so asserts L. D. Alford, a novelist who explores with originality those cultures and societies we think we already know. He builds tales that make ancient people and times real to us. His stories uniquely explore the connections between present events, history, and the future—he combines them with threads of reality that bring fiction alive. L. D. Alford is familiar with technology and cultures—he earned a B.S. in Chemistry from
, an M.S. in
Mechanical Engineering from Pacific Lutheran
University , a Ph.D. in
Aerospace Engineering from the Boston
University , and is a
graduate of University
of Dayton ,
and Air Command and Air War College . He is widely traveled and has spent long
periods in Europe, Asia, and Central America.
L. D. Alford is an author who combines intimate scientific and cultural
knowledge into fiction worlds that breathe reality. Staff
Synopsis: Approximately 500 Words
Shiggaion Tash is a screw-up. Not your run of the mill screw-up, rather, she is a truly royal screw-up. From the botched experiment in her graduate class at Oxford, where she exposed all her students to a radionuclide to blowing the kneecap off her pistol range instructor at Sandhurst, Shiggaion is a screw-up. What’s worse is Sandhurst, sent her to Military Intelligence (MI) science where she released nerve gas and sent an entire floor to hospital. From there science sent her to section VIII, Clandestine Communications where she broadcast classified operational codes to the Britain’s enemies. Section VIII sent her to Section V, counter-espionage reports, where she designed an organizational database system that lost all the reports. Section V moved her on to Section VII, Economic Intelligence. There, she dumped a load of contraband in the Thames. Section VII pushed her into Section N, a section that exploits the contents of foreign diplomatic bags. Shiggaion accidentally lost her identification badge inside a diplomatic pouch and caused an international incident. Section N passed her to Section D, Political Covert Actions and Paramilitary Operations. There, she wrecked an SUV and sent her teammates to hospital. Finally, Section D gave her over to Hostage Rescue. During a hostage recovery exercise Shiggaion accidently shot a hostage. It was a laser scored exercise, but she did make a mark—someone else did too. One of the instructors shot Shiggaion in the left buttocks with a tranq round.
Shaggaion woke strapped to a medical table with a pain in her left cheek and a drug induced headache. She also has to go--badly. Shiggaion can’t imagine such treatment. Shiggaion’s cries finally provoke a response. Sorcha Davis throws open the door, threatens Shiggaion with bodily harm, and christens her—Shiggy. To survive, indeed to be able to relieve her bladder, and to prevent bodily harm, Shiggy must acquiesce to Sorcha’s demands and accept her new name. She must do much more than that. Shiggy must acknowledge and admit to all her previous lapses of judgement and take responsibility for them.
Thus begins the training of Shiggy Tash. Sorcha dresses her, arms her (simulated weapons at first), trains her, punishes her, demeans her, and fashions her into a lady. All for the purpose, so says Sorcha, to make Shiggy a sensual and sexy spy who can woo the hearts of men and woman. Shiggy looks like a ditz—a very beautiful ditz after Sorcha is done, but a ditz. Sorcha needs an intelligent ditz who doesn’t look like a dangerous person or a spy at all. Shiggy isn’t so sure, plus there is much more to this business than simple or not so simple spying.
Sorcha tells her that they are part of Stela, an organization in British Intelligence that protects the UK from supernatural beings and events. Shiggy doesn’t believe in the supernatural and now she must work with it—she even meets some supernatural beings. What’s to become of Shiggy now?
Concept of the Work: Approximately 250 Words
The concept behind Sorcha is to show a truly flawed person who initially won’t take responsibility for her actions and bad judgement. The novel shows the transformation of a person of bad judgement, taste, and personality into a powerful and useful person.
A secondary concept in the novel is love and pursuit of love by gentlemen for a lady who isn’t used to anyone loving her and another woman who has never been loved because of her personality.
Registration: WGA, ISBN, or Library of Congress, Write the number.
Other Information: If you have more work, a website, anything interesting and professional, especially any awards or recognition.
Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si www.HearthGoddess.com, a matron rescues and educates the Queen of the fae.
Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer www.GoddessofLightNovel.com, a math genius girl gets a boyfriend and becomes a Japanese goddess.
Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire www.GoddessofDarkness.com, a British agent accidentally becomes involved with a vampire.
Khione: Enchantment and the Fox www.GoddessNovel.com, a graduate student discovers a demigoddess in modern
Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon www.AksinyaNovel.com, a Russian princess calls a demon to protect her family.
Dana-ana: Enchantment of the Maiden www.Dana-ana.com, the mystery of Dana-ana Goewyn.
Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth www.EnchantmentoftheHearth.com, the misadventures of archeologists in modern Greece.
Antebellum www.AntebellumNovel.com the mystery of a house that has been missing since the American Civil War and the girl who is called to it.
The Second Mission www.TheSecondMission.com is a historical fiction novel about ancient
published in 2003 by Xulon. Greece
Centurion www.CenturionNovel.com published January 2008 and Aegypt www.AegyptNovel.com also published in January 2008 are historical fiction novels from OakTara Fiction www.OakTara.com
The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox is a science fiction series published by OakTara Fiction
The End of Honor (published, July 2008) www.TheEndofHonor.com
The Fox’s Honor (published Oct 2008) www.TheFoxsHonor.com
A Season of Honor (published Nov 2008) www.ASeasonofHonor.com
Ancient Light is a suspense series published by Broadstreet, Eleutheria, September 2014 in a three-in-one www.AncientLight.com.
Aegypt (second edition published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.Aegypt.com
Sister of Light (published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.SisterofLight.com
Sister of Darkness (published by OakTara Fiction, 2014) www.SisterofDarkness.com
More information is available at www.ldalford.com
L.D. Alford has more than 40 technical papers published in international journals on flight test, military policy, flight safety, space, and cyberwar. His military aviation writing is featured as Military Aviation Adventures on www.wingsoverkansas.com.
No one would expect Shiggy Tash to be anything more than a ditz. She’s even blond, but she may be the most dangerous person in British Intelligence—particularly to British intelligence.
Shiggy doesn’t believe in the supernatural. She’s living in a supernatural house with supernatural guardians, and meets all kinds of supernatural beings. Perhaps she needs to make a second appraisal.
What fun. A failed British agent with poor judgement who happens to be a cursed warrior. Is there any hope for Shiggy?
1. No more than 3 sentences about the content of your manuscript.
Shiggy Tash finally meets her match in Sorcha Davis—Sorcha has a large stick, knows Shiggy’s every thought, and has convinced the village that Shiggy is recovering from a brain injury.
The world of British Intelligence meets the supernatural in an entertaining tale of rehabilitation, love, and spying.
Shiggy Tash is the most dangerous person in the world to British Intelligence—she happens to be a member, slightly out of control, and in need of a good trainer.
2. One sentence about successful works similar to yours.
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse is a unique novel with nothing very similar—it is an idea and a theme wholly unto itself.
3. No more than 2 sentences about yourself. (use 3rd person)
L. D. Alford is a novelist whose writing uniquely explores the connections between present events and history—he combines them with threads of reality that bring the past alive.
Dr. Alford is a scientist and widely traveled author who combines intimate scientific and cultural knowledge into fiction worlds that breathe reality.
4. No more than 2 sentences that include “other,” i.e. any reasons, relationships, or other factors that might make your work more attractive.
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse continues the supernatural themes introduced in L.D. Alford’s Enchantment and Ancient Light novels. It is a standalone novel.
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse is exciting fiction from the celebrated author of Essie: Enchantment and the Aor Si, Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer, Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire, Khione: Enchantment and the Fox, Dana-ana: Enchantment of the Maiden, Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth, Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon, Antebellum, Centurion, Aegypt, The End of Honor, The Fox’s Honor, A Season of Honor, Sister of Light, and Sister of Darkness.
I left in all the information for Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse. I’ll write and put in the information for School over the next few weeks.
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