Writing - part x701, Writing a Novel, Fleshing Out Characters, Antagonist

8 December 2018, Writing - part x701, Writing a Novel, Fleshing Out Characters, Antagonist

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but my primary publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t succeed in the past business and publishing environment.  I'll keep you informed, but I need a new publisher.  More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:

1.      Design the initial scene

2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)

a.       Research as required

b.      Develop the initial setting

c.       Develop the characters

d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)

3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)

4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)

5.      Write the climax scene

6.      Write the falling action scene(s)

7.      Write the dénouement scene

I finished writing my 29^th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.  The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.  

Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. 

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30^th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I finished my 29^th novel, working title Detective.  I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter. 

How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

For novel 30:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

For novel 31:  TBD 

Here is the scene development outline:

1. Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)

2. Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)

3. Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.

4. Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.

5. Write the release

6. Write the kicker

          

Today:  Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a novel?  I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel together.  We can start with developing an idea then move into the details of the writing. 

I’m writing from the Florida Coast in Destin, and a tropical storm/hurricane is on its way. 

In this new novel, who is the antagonist?  At this moment, I don’t know.  The antagonist is a necessary character.  You can’t have a novel without one—I should write, you can’t have a classical entertaining novel without an antagonist.  What is an antagonist?

         

The antagonist attempts to prevent the protagonist from resolving the telic flaw.  This can be direct or indirect.  Direct is where the antagonist directly opposes the protagonist.  For example, in a detective novel, the criminal is usually the antagonist.  It is possible for the antagonist to be an official in the government or the police department who is accidentally interfering in the investigation.  This is an indirect antagonist. 

What will I do?  I will have a direct antagonist.  I’m not sure who will be the antagonist because I haven’t decided on the completion of the plot.  Whatever the plot will eventually be, the antagonist is the person who will directly or indirectly interfere with the finishing of Sorcha and Deirdre.  They are tied at the hip, so I intend the novel to be a comedy and not a comedy where the protagonist’s helper gives up her part in the resolution.. It might be fun to make it look that way.  That is to have Deirdre give up her finishing for Sorcha, but then resolve the entire novel with both reaching the goal—this is a common telic flaw type resolution.

Back to the antagonist.  The antagonist must directly or indirectly interfere with the protagonist resolving the telic flaw.  The potentials are that the direct antagonist could be within the school as a teacher or the head mistress.  An indirect protagonist might be an outside character who is opposed by Sorcha or Deirdre within the resolution of the plot.  In any case, the antagonist must be something that attempts to prevent the resolution of the telic flaw. 

What about the protagonist’s helper?  

More tomorrow.

For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:

http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com  

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