9 September 2021, Writing - part xx707 Writing a Novel, Plots and My Novels, more on Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective
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succeed in the past business and publishing environment. I’ll keep you
informed, but I need a new publisher.
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Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire
novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the
commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained,
how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing
techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back
through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I’m using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I’ll
keep you informed along the way.
Today’s Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can
be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the
five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2. Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist,
protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3. Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied
setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4. Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5. Write the climax scene
6. Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose
Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around
dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
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Cover
Proposal |
The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working
title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel.
Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea with a
theme statement. Since I’m writing a new
novel, we need a new theme statement.
Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red
Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test
pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre
and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover
difficult mysteries, people, and events.
For Novel 32: Shiggy
Tash finds a lost girl in the isolated Scottish safe house her organization
gives her for her latest assignment: Rose Craigie has nothing, is alone, and
needs someone or something to rescue and acknowledge her as a human being.
Here is the
scene development outline:
1. Scene
input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the
scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine
the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop
the tension and release.
4. Write the
scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the
release
6. Write the
kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a
novel? I can tell you what I do, and
show you how I go about putting a novel together. We can start with developing an idea then
move into the details of the writing.
To start a
novel, I picture an initial scene. I may
start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial
scene. I get the idea for an initial
scene from all kinds of sources. To help
get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene.
1.
Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the
protagonist’s helper
2.
Action point in the plot
3. Buildup to an exciting scene
4.
Indirect introduction of the
protagonist
Ideas. We need
ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the
protagonist and the telic flaw. Ideas
don’t come fully armed from the mind of Zeus.
We need to cultivate ideas.
1.
Read novels.
2. Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want
to write about.
3. Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will
kill ideas in your mind.
4. Study.
5. Teach.
6. Make the catharsis.
7.
Write.
The development of ideas is based on study and research, but
it is also based on creativity. Creativity
is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in
a new form. It is a reflection of
something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the
intellect). Creativity requires
consuming, thinking, and producing.
If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and
ideas, we are ready to become creative.
Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to
present old ideas in a new form.
Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are
seeing some part of the world in a new way.
I’ve worked through creativity and the protagonist. The ultimate point is that if you properly
develop your protagonist, you have created your novel. This moves us on to plots and initial
scenes. As I noted, if you have a
protagonist, you have a novel. The
reason is that a protagonist comes with a telic flaw, and a telic flaw provides
a plot and theme. If you have a
protagonist, that gives you a telic flaw, a plot, and a theme. I will also argue this gives you an initial
scene as well.
So, we worked extensively on the protagonist. I gave you many examples great, bad, and
average. Most of these were from
classics, but I also used my own novels and protagonists as examples. Here’s my plan.
1.
The protagonist comes with a telic
flaw – the telic flaw isn’t necessarily a flaw in the protagonist, but rather a
flaw in the world of the protagonist that only the Romantic protagonist can
resolve.
2.
The telic
flaw determines the plot.
3. The telic flaw determines the theme.
4. The telic flaw and the protagonist determines the initial
scene.
5. The protagonist and the telic flaw determines the initial
setting.
6. Plot examples from great classic plots.
7. Plot examples from mediocre classic plots.
8. Plot examples from my novels.
9. Creativity and the telic flaw and plots.
10.
Writer’s block as a problem of continuing
the plot.
Every great or good protagonist comes with their own telic
flaw. I showed how this worked with my
own writing and novels. Let’s go over it
in terms of the plot.
This is all about the telic flaw. Every protagonist and every novel must come
with a telic flaw. They are the same
telic flaw. That telic flaw can be
external, internal or both.
We found that a self-discovery telic flaw or a personal
success telic flaw can potentially take a generic plot. We should be able to get an idea for the plot
purely from the protagonist, telic flaw and setting. All of these are interlaced and bring us our
plot.
For a great plot, the resolution of the telic flaw has to be
a surprise to the protagonist and to the reader. This is both the measure and the goal. As I noted before, for a great plot, the
author needs to make the telic flaw resolution appear to be impossible, but
then it happens. There is much more to
this.
I evaluated the plots from the list of 112 classics and
categorized them according to the following scale:
Overall (o) – These are the three overall plots we defined above:
redemption, achievement, and revelation.
Achievement (a) – There are plots that fall under the idea of the
achievement plot.
Quality (q)
– These are plots based on a personal or character quality.
Setting (s)
– These are plots based on a setting.
Item (i)
– These are plots based on an item.
I looked at each novel and pulled out the plot types, the telic flaw,
plotline, and the theme of the novel. I didn’t make a list of the themes,
but we identified the telic flaw as internal and external and by plot
type. This generally gives the plotline.
Overall (o)
1. Redemption (o) – 17i, 7e, 23ei, 8 – 49%
2. Revelation (o) –2e, 64, 1i – 60%
3. Achievement (o) – 16e, 19ei, 4i, 43 – 73%
Achievement (a)
1. Detective or mystery (a) – 56, 1e – 51%
2. Revenge or vengeance (a) –3ie, 3e, 45 – 46%
3. Zero to hero (a) – 29 – 26%
4. Romance (a) –1ie, 41 – 37%
5. Coming of age (a) –1ei, 25 – 23%
6. Progress of technology (a) – 6 – 5%
7. Discovery (a) – 3ie, 57 – 54%
8. Money (a) – 2e, 26 – 25%
9. Spoiled child (a) – 7 – 6%
10. Legal (a) – 5 – 4%
11. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16%
12. Self-discovery (a) – 3i, 12 – 13%
13. Guilt or Crime (a) – 32 – 29%
14. Proselytizing (a) – 4 – 4%
15. Reason (a) – 10, 1ie – 10%
16. Escape (a) – 1ie, 23 – 21%
17. Knowledge or Skill (a) – 26 – 23%
18. Secrets (a) – 21 – 19%
Quality (q)
1. Messiah (q) – 10 – 9%
2. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16%
3. Rejected love (rejection) (q) – 1ei, 21 –
20%
4. Miscommunication (q) – 8 – 7%
5. Love triangle (q) – 14 – 12%
6. Betrayal (q) – 1i, 1ie, 46 – 43%
7. Blood will out or fate (q) –1i, 1e, 26 – 25%
8. Psychological (q) –1i, 45 – 41%
9. Magic (q) – 8 – 7%
10. Mistaken identity (q) – 18 – 16%
11. Illness (q) – 1e, 19 – 18%
12. Anti-hero (q) – 6 – 5%
13. Immorality (q) – 3i, 8 – 10%
14. Satire (q) – 10 – 9%
15. Camaraderie (q) – 19 – 17%
16. Curse (q) – 4 – 4%
17. Insanity (q) – 8 – 7%
18. Mentor (q) – 12 – 11%
Setting (s)
1. End of the World (s) – 3 – 3%
2. War (s) – 20 – 18%
3. Anti-war (s) –2 – 2%
4. Travel (s) –1e, 62 – 56%
5. Totalitarian (s) – 1e, 8 – 8%
6. Horror (s) – 15 – 13%
7. Children (s) – 24 – 21%
8. Historical (s) – 19 – 17%
9. School (s) – 11 – 10%
10. Parallel (s) – 4 – 4%
11. Allegory (s) – 10 – 9%
12. Fantasy world (s) – 5 – 4%
13. Prison (s) – 2 – 2%
Item (i)
1. Article (i) – 1e, 46 – 42%
Here is a list of my novels:
1* |
SF |
A Season of Honor (Honor III) |
1986 |
P 08 |
2 |
1 |
30-Oct |
Nov |
|
2* |
SF |
The Fox’s Honor (Honor II) |
1989 |
P 08 |
3 |
2 |
2-May |
Oct |
|
3 |
SF |
The End of Honor (Honor I) |
1995 |
P 08 |
9 |
3 |
13-Jul |
Jul |
|
4 |
HF |
Antebellum |
1991 |
* |
4 |
4 |
7-Feb |
||
5* |
F |
Aegypt |
1992 |
P 08 |
5 |
5 |
16-Jun |
Jan |
|
6* |
HF |
Centurion |
1995 |
P 08 |
8 |
6 |
1-Feb |
Jan |
|
7a* |
SF |
Athelstan Cying |
1992 |
A |
6 |
7 |
26-Sep |
||
8 15 |
SF |
Twilight Lamb |
2007 |
A |
7b* |
8 |
8-Aug |
||
9 16 |
SF |
Regia Anglorum |
2007 |
A |
7c |
17 |
23-Nov |
||
10* |
SF |
The Second Mission* |
1996 |
P 03 |
10 |
9 |
13-Nov |
Aug |
|
11 |
Fan |
Illidin |
1977 |
I |
1 |
Sep |
|||
12 |
F |
Sister of Light |
1997 |
C |
11 |
10 |
16-Aug |
||
13 |
F |
House |
1994 |
I |
7 |
23-Dec |
|||
14 |
F |
Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth |
2006 |
* |
13 |
11 |
28-Dec |
||
15 |
Fan |
Aramis |
2006 |
I |
12 |
27-Apr |
|||
16 |
HF |
Japan |
|
I |
14 |
||||
17 |
F |
Sister of Darkness |
2008 |
C |
17 |
12 |
3-Jun |
||
18 |
F |
Shadow of Darkness |
2008 |
A |
18 |
13 |
14-Sep |
||
19 |
F |
Shadow of Light |
2008 |
A |
tt5t |
14 |
24-Oct |
||
20 |
F |
Children of Light and Darkness |
2008 |
A |
20 |
15 |
1-Dec |
||
21 |
F |
Warrior of Light |
2009 |
A |
21 |
16 |
1-Feb |
||
22 |
HF |
Praetorian |
|
|
22 |
||||
23 23 |
SF |
Shadowed Vale |
2009 |
A |
18 |
10-May |
|||
24 24 |
SF |
Ddraig Goch |
2009 |
W |
25-Aug |
||||
25 |
F |
Warrior of Darkness |
2009 |
* |
25 |
19 |
29-Oct |
||
26 |
F |
Dana-ana: Enchantment and the Maiden |
2010 |
* |
26 |
20 |
10-Jun |
||
27 |
F |
Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon |
2010 |
A |
27 |
21 |
1-Nov |
||
28 |
F |
Khione: Enchantment and the Fox |
2011 |
* |
28 |
22 |
1-Mar |
||
29 |
F |
Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire |
2013 |
* |
29 |
23 |
26-Nov |
||
30 |
F |
Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer |
2014 |
* |
30 |
24 |
1-May |
||
31 |
SF |
Escape from Freedom |
2014 |
* |
31 |
25 |
2-Oct |
||
32 |
F |
Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si |
2015 |
* |
32 |
26 |
1-May |
||
33 |
F |
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse |
2016 |
* |
33 |
27 |
1-Mar |
||
34 |
F |
Red Sonja |
2016 |
W |
34 |
XX |
1-Mar |
||
35 |
F |
Deirdre: Enchantment and the School |
2016 |
* |
35 |
28 |
1-Jul |
||
36 |
F |
Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective |
2018 |
* |
36 |
29 |
1-Jul |
||
37 |
F |
Cassandra: Enchantment and the Warriors |
2018 |
* |
37 |
|
1-Jul |
||
38 |
F |
Rose: Enchantment and the Flower |
2021 |
* |
38 |
|
1-Mar |
Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective was another novel developed from my blog. What I was doing is showing my readers about
how a plot works and can be developed.
In addition, I was developing a romantic plot. The example I used was a detective plot. The reason is that the detective plot is the
easiest to see and explain.
The telic flaw in the detective plot is to solve the
mystery. The telic flaw is the
mystery. What I did with Blue Rose:
Enchantment and the Detective is to develop a plot and then the protagonist
for that plot. The protagonist was Azure
(Blue) Rose. The point was to develop a
protagonist whose problem was directly related to the telic flaw of the
novel. That’s what I did.
I used my typical supernatural reflected worldview with a
pathos developing protagonist and that was Azure Rose Wishart.
Here is some of the information on the novel:
The Lady Azure Rose Wishart, in the sixth form, the head girl at
Wycombe Abbey, and a capable detective.
She is also the top girl, a scratch golfer, and lives with a couple of
dubious acquaintances—one is most likely a vampire and the other a
werecreature. Well, most likely. In any case, the Lady Azure Rose Wishart lost
her estate but not her title. Because of
that, she could be on the parishes’ charity list except she has a scholarship
to Wycombe and the Crown pays for her other work. The Lady Wishart is driven to reacquire her
estate and make her way in the world.
She wants to be a supernatural detective.
We first meet her as she untangles a mystery for the New Scotland
Yard. Unfortunately, this isn’t a true
supernatural crime, but Azure (the Lady Wishart) solves it in no time, and she
is now on New Scotland Yard’s payroll.
Another few thousand mysteries, and she might buy back her estate. That’s her first problem, she doesn’t make
enough to ensure she can ever win back her hereditary holdings. The second problem is just about to hit her
squarely between the eyes—Lachlann Calloway meets her at a party.
It was truly an accident of occasion and invitation that brought
Lady Azure Rose Wishart into the sights of the dashing Wing Commander Lachlann
Calloway, but so is life. He immediately
fell in love with the ravishing and dangerous Azure. However, Azure doesn’t have time for a lover
or a boyfriend. She, of course does
everything in her power to discourage him.
During their next meeting, she thoroughly embarrasses and chastises him. On their first date, he privately blows her
cover and propriety. What Lachlann
discovers is that his mother, a high level manager in her majesty’s
intelligence operations, has black listed Azure from any intelligence
work. This is curious, but he’s still in
love.
Instead of being discouraged, as Azure would have liked, Lachlann
gloms on to her like a social leech. She
isn’t used to these types of entanglements.
In any case, Lachlann is trying his hardest to entice Azure to love. She is trying her hardest to be rid of the
puppy, Lachlann Calloway. Lachlann’s
mother wants nothing more than for Lachlann to dump the unwilling Azure. Meanwhile, Azure, through New Scotland Yard,
has uncovered a truly supernatural mystery.
With Lachlann’s help and encouragement, Azure proceeds to take a
sledge hammer to the Crown’s supernatural intelligence structure—she has a
mystery to solve. The Queen approves,
Lachlann’s mother disapproves, and the others have been ordered to accommodate
and work with the temperamental Azure.
Azure’s goal is still the same, but not everyone else agrees. Will Lachlann’s love prevail? Will Azure win her estate? Will the truly supernatural mystery be
solved? The real question is will
Lachlann’s mother ever resolve herself to a potential daughter-in-law who is,
in her own words, despicable?
Let’s evaluate the plots.
Overall (o)
1. Redemption (o) – 17i, 7e, 23ei, 8 – 49% Azure Rose needs physical and emotional redemption. She has lost her house, her family, and might
lose her position with the Crown. The problem
is that she also has problems in some ways relating to people. Lachlann wants to rearrange her thinking and help
her.
2. Revelation (o) –2e, 64, 1i – 60% Azure Rose is a person worthy of revelation. She is the Keeper of the Book of the Fae and
works for the Crown. She has great needs
that she is trying to solve herself.
3. Achievement (o) – 16e, 19ei, 4i, 43 – 73% Azure Rose wants to be a supernatural
detective—more than that, she wants to redeem her estate from the Crown. Lachlann wants to marry Azure Rose—more than
that, he wants Azure Rose to fall in love with him. He’s trying hard.
Achievement (a)
1. Detective or mystery (a) – 56, 1e – 51% There
are multiple mysteries in this novel to be solved. That is one of the big entertainment features
of the detective plot.
2. Revenge or vengeance (a) –3ie, 3e, 45 – 46% This is a subplot with the Fae and others,
but not with the main characters.
3. Zero to hero (a) – 29 – 26% Azure Rose is a zero, but is working toward
hero. Lachlann is a hero, but it aiding
Azure Rose to becoming a hero.
4. Romance (a) –1ie, 41 – 37% Yes, well, one sided Lachlann is wooing Azure
Rose.
5. Coming of age (a) –1ei, 25 – 23% Nope.
6. Progress of technology (a) – 6 – 5% Nope.
7. Discovery (a) – 3ie, 57 – 54% This entire novel is about discovery for both.
8. Money (a) – 2e, 26 – 25% Money is an important plot in the novel. Azure Rose is driven to recover her estate,
and she needs money.
9. Spoiled child (a) – 7 – 6% Azure Rose is the opposite of a spoiled
child, but she sometimes acts spoiled.
10. Legal (a) – 5 – 4% Yes,
to a large degree with the crown and the problems of Azure Rose and her family.
11. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16%
Nope.
12. Self-discovery (a) – 3i, 12 – 13% There is a very strong element of
self-discovery for the characters in this novel.
13. Guilt or Crime (a) – 32 – 29%
Azure Rose is shown to be guilty of crimes, but it is a misunderstanding.
14. Proselytizing (a) – 4 – 4%
Nope.
15. Reason (a) – 10, 1ie – 10%
Yes, the resolution all comes through reason.
16. Escape (a) – 1ie, 23 – 21% Nope.
17. Knowledge or Skill (a) – 26 – 23% Knowledge and skills are the tools that are
used and that they are learning.
18. Secrets (a) – 21 – 19%
This novel is filled with secrets and revealed secrets.
Quality (q)
1. Messiah (q) – 10 – 9% Nope.
2. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16% Nope.
3. Rejected love (rejection) (q) – 1ei, 21 –
20% Yes, through the novel Azure Rose
rejects Lachlann’s love.
4. Miscommunication (q) – 8 – 7% Yes, there is a misunderstanding that leads
to Azure Rose being looked at in a negative fashoin.
5. Love triangle (q) – 14 – 12% Nope.
6. Betrayal (q) – 1i, 1ie, 46 – 43% Nope.
7. Blood will out or fate (q) –1i, 1e, 26 – 25% Nope
8. Psychological (q) –1i, 45 – 41% This is a psychological novel on many
levels.
9. Magic (q) – 8 – 7% To some degree with the idea of glamour.
10. Mistaken identity (q) – 18 – 16% Nope.
11. Illness (q) – 1e, 19 – 18%
Yes, Lachlann is injured.
12. Anti-hero (q) – 6 – 5%
Nope.
13. Immorality (q) – 3i, 8 – 10%
Nope.
14. Satire (q) – 10 – 9%
Not really.
15. Camaraderie (q) – 19 – 17%
Yes, there is a large degree of moving camaraderie based on associations
and groups.
16. Curse (q) – 4 – 4% Nope.
17. Insanity (q) – 8 – 7% Nope.
18. Mentor (q) – 12 – 11% Yes.
Setting (s)
1. End of the World (s) – 3 – 3% Nope.
2. War (s) – 20 – 18% Nope.
3. Anti-war (s) –2 – 2% Nope.
4. Travel (s) –1e, 62 – 56% Some travel around Wycombe and Britain.
5. Totalitarian (s) – 1e, 8 – 8% Nope.
6. Horror (s) – 15 – 13% Nope.
7. Children (s) – 24 – 21% Not really.
8. Historical (s) – 19 – 17% Yes, modern era.
9. School (s) – 11 – 10% Yes, Wycombe Abby.
10. Parallel (s) – 4 – 4% Nope.
11. Allegory (s) – 10 – 9%
Nope.
12. Fantasy world (s) – 5 – 4%
Nope.
13. Prison (s) – 2 – 2% Yes,
side point of Azure Rose’s father and family issues.
Item (i)
1. Article (i) – 1e, 46 – 42% Yes, the Book of the Fae.
I wrote Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective as
an example of a detective plot. The
reason was to give as simple example as possible of the telic flaw interaction
with the protagonist.
If you remember, in a comedy where the protagonist overcomes
the telic flaw, the telic flaw is the problem that must be overcome or resolved
in the novel. In the case of the detective
plot, the telic flaw is the mystery or the crime (same thing). The protagonist must resolve the mystery to
resolve the telic flaw. I used a
detective plot as an example because it is perhaps the simplest type of overall
plot in a novel. I also wanted to show
my readers how the protagonist interacts with the telic flaw.
I’ve written about this before. The plot of a Romantic novel should look
impossible to resolve—the author cognately writes and designs the plot such
that the resolution looks impossible until it is inevitable in the climax. In addition, the telic flaw of the novel
should become the telic flaw of the protagonist. This is easy to see in a detective plot. The reason is that the mystery must obviously
be resolved by the protagonist. The
mystery becomes the telic flaw for the protagonist. Such a direct connection is more difficult to
see in a romance plot. Although the
characters are supposed to fall in love, that’s the telic flaw of the
protagonist, the connection between the telic flaw and the protagonist is more
tenuous. In the mystery or detective
plot, it is direct. As I wrote, I use
this as an example to make this obvious.
There is much more to Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. This novel is only on the surface a detective
novel. I wrote in my blogs that I
developed Azure Rose for the express purpose of the detective type protagonist
and plot, she is. Even more, I designed
her as a type of female Sherlock Holms.
I couldn’t help bringing in a romance plot with a love interest. Azure Rose has no desire to be in love at
all. I really liked this part too.
One of my main prepublication readers kept pushing me to
write a novel where the male strongly pursued the female protagonist. I set up this situation for just that
reason. In addition, the circumstances of
the plot just happened to integrate many of the other characters, settings, and
organizations I happened to develop for other novels.
Thus, Lachlann happens to be the son of Ceridwen a very important
character and protagonist in my other novels.
Ceridwen or Kathrin Calloway is not enamored of Azure Rose—in fact, she
despises her and has poisoned the courts and others against Azure Rose. This brings in the miscommunication and legal
aspects of the plot plus creates a conflict between Lachlann and his
mother. This might need some more work
in the novel. My prepublication reader
thought some of it seemed contrived, but so it was. I just need to make it more cohesive.
With Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective, I
really wanted to write a fun and entertaining example of a great detective plot
and make the plot very complex. I added
in the reflected worldview through the fact that Azure Rose is the Keeper of
the Book of the Fae. Her work to
reconcile the Fae and there legal difficulties is a very fun add to the novel,
and brings Lacklann in. The ultimate
resolution of the climax is the mystery of Dana-ana which resolves to set up my
novel Dana-ana: Enchantment of the Maiden. I always wanted to write a novel to show how
Dana-ana was banished and why she was punished, and I did.
Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective is the last of my completed novels. I guess I can write about the novels I’m writing
on at the moment. For some reason, my
writing time has been squeezed in the last couple of years. I’ll give some information on the two books I’m
writing at the moment and the other book I need to finish. I can also give you some information on my
technical writing.
In the end, we can figure out what makes a work have a great
plot and theme, and apply this to our writing.
The beginning of creativity is study and effort. We can use this to extrapolate to
creativity. In addition, we need to look
at recording ideas and working with ideas.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual
novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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