27 April 2021, Writing - part xx572 Writing a Novel, More Telic Flaw to Initial Scene
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the
internet, but my primary publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t
succeed in the past business and publishing environment. I’ll keep you
informed, but I need a new publisher.
More information can be found at www.ancientlight.com. Check out my novels—I think
you’ll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire
novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the
commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained,
how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing
techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back
through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I’m using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I’ll
keep you informed along the way.
Today’s Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can
be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the
five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2. Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist,
protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3. Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting,
implied characters, implied action movement)
4. Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5. Write the climax scene
6. Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose
Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around
dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
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The
most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you
have to move to the rising action. I
am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel.
Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea with a
theme statement. Since I’m writing a new
novel, we need a new theme statement.
Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red
Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test
pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre
and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover
difficult mysteries, people, and events.
For Novel 32: Shiggy
Tash finds a lost girl in the isolated Scottish safe house her organization
gives her for her latest assignment: Rose Craigie has nothing, is alone, and
needs someone or something to rescue and acknowledge her as a human being.
Here is the
scene development outline:
1. Scene
input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the
scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine
the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop
the tension and release.
4. Write the
scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the
release
6. Write the
kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a
novel? I can tell you what I do, and
show you how I go about putting a novel together. We can start with developing an idea then
move into the details of the writing.
To start a
novel, I picture an initial scene. I may
start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial
scene. I get the idea for an initial
scene from all kinds of sources. To help
get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene.
1.
Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the
protagonist’s helper
2.
Action point in the plot
3. Buildup to an exciting scene
4.
Indirect introduction of the
protagonist
Ideas. We need
ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist
and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come
fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We
need to cultivate ideas.
1.
Read novels.
2. Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want
to write about.
3. Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will
kill ideas in your mind.
4. Study.
5. Teach.
6. Make the catharsis.
7.
Write.
The development of ideas is based on study and research, but
it is also based on creativity. Creativity
is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in
a new form. It is a reflection of
something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the
intellect). Creativity requires
consuming, thinking, and producing.
If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and
ideas, we are ready to become creative.
Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to
present old ideas in a new form.
Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are
seeing some part of the world in a new way.
I’ve worked through creativity and the protagonist. The ultimate point is that if you properly
develop your protagonist, you have created your novel. This moves us on to plots and initial
scenes. As I noted, if you have a
protagonist, you have a novel. The
reason is that a protagonist comes with a telic flaw, and a telic flaw provides
a plot and theme. If you have a
protagonist, that gives you a telic flaw, a plot, and a theme. I will also argue this gives you an initial
scene as well.
So, we worked extensively on the protagonist. I gave you many examples great, bad, and
average. Most of these were from
classics, but I also used my own novels and protagonists as examples. Here’s my plan.
1.
The protagonist comes with a telic
flaw – the telic flaw isn’t necessarily a flaw in the protagonist, but rather a
flaw in the world of the protagonist that only the Romantic protagonist can
resolve.
2.
The telic
flaw determines the plot.
3. The telic flaw determines the theme.
4. The telic flaw and the protagonist determines the initial
scene.
5. The protagonist and the telic flaw determines the initial
setting.
6. Plot examples from great classic plots.
7. Plot examples from mediocre classic plots.
8. Plot examples from my novels.
9. Creativity and the telic flaw and plots.
10.
Writer’s block as a problem of
continuing the plot.
Every great or good protagonist comes with their own telic
flaw. I showed how this worked with my
own writing and novels. Let’s go over it
in terms of the plot.
This is all about the telic flaw. Every protagonist and every novel must come
with a telic flaw. They are the same
telic flaw. That telic flaw can be
external, internal or both.
We found that a self-discovery telic flaw or a personal
success telic flaw can potentially take a generic plot. We should be able to get an idea for the plot
purely from the protagonist, telic flaw and setting. All of these are interlaced and bring us our
plot.
For a great plot, the resolution of the telic flaw has to be
a surprise to the protagonist and to the reader. This is both the measure and the goal. As I noted before, for a great plot, the
author needs to make the telic flaw resolution appear to be impossible, but
then it happens. There is much more to
this. Here’s the list of plots I’ve
looked at already:
Redemption: the protagonist
must make an internal or external change to resolve the telic flaw. This is the
major style of most great modern plots.
Revelation: the novel reveals
portions of the life, experiences, and ideas of the protagonist in a cohesive
and serial fashion from the initial scene to the climax and telic flaw
resolution.
Achievement: the novel is
characterized by a goal that the protagonist must achieve to resolve the telic
flaw.
I evaluated the list of plots and categorized them according
to the following scale:
Overall (o) – These are the three overall plots we defined above:
redemption, achievement, and revelation.
Achievement (a) – There are plots that fall under the idea of the
achievement plot.
Quality (q)
– These are plots based on a personal or character quality.
Setting (s)
– These are plots based on a setting.
Item (i)
– These are plots based on an item.
I hate to pull down our list of plots and the information
we’ve developed from them, but it is time to move on.
Plots, the telic flaw, and how they relate to the
protagonist are very deep and important subjects for the writer.
We saw the theme is redundant; however, the theme statement
might be helpful. That’s about all we
need to say about that. The theme is
worthless, but we need to go on to the most important idea and part of the
novel.
The most important part of the novel is the initial
scene. Now, the most important element
of a novel is the protagonist. If you
remember, the telic flaw comes with the protagonist. The plotline comes out of the telic
flaw. Once we have a protagonist, that
means we have a telic flaw and a potential plotline. The only thing we are missing is the initial
scene.
Let me point out, if you have a theme statement then you are
a step closer to an initial scene. The
initial scene is the most important scene and the most important part of your
novel.
Let’s get into the initial scene and how important it is. Once we understand the initial scene, we can
figure out how to write one.
The initial scene sells your novel to readers and to
publishers. The world has changed a
little, but not that much. If you are in
a book store, your subject and genre will usually be the first attractant to
your novel. The second is the cover or
title. Then the reader will look at the
cover material. Finally, the reader will
read a little from the first writing in the novel. That, we hope, is the initial scene. If it’s something else, you are probably
screwed. For example, if it’s a prologue,
and you didn’t write the most awesome prolog known to man or god, then your
book goes back on the shelf. If your
prolog is wonderful, but then the reader continues to the initial scene, what
will they find? They will find that you
wrote something completely different and potentially extraneous to the entire
novel. Prologues suck. Don’t include them. If they are necessary, then include it in the
actual novel, not as a prologue.
Now, what happens when a publisher reviews your work? Well, most likely, you self-selected by genre. The publisher doesn’t have to. For example, you wouldn’t send a historical fiction
work to a science fiction publisher. So,
when the publisher gets your work, you chose the genre based on what they
expect. Otherwise, round file. Next, they will read your cover letter. If they get past the letter, they will open
your novel, figuratively, to the beginning.
Since there is no cover and only the marketing material in the cover
letter, the publisher is at the initial scene, we hope. If they are at the prologue, they may sigh
and skip it to the initial scene—if they are in a good mood that day. If they aren’t, then round file. You do know the round file is the trashcan,
right? The first real thing the
publisher should read from your novel is the initial scene.
It’s safe to say, if the reader or the publisher isn’t very
happy with your initial scene, how probable is it that they will continue to
any other part of your novel? Many
teachers and writing advisers will tell you that if your first word, sentence, and/or
paragraph doesn’t excite and interest your reader, they will not buy your
book. I’ll go with that. I think the reader is usually a bit more open
than a word or a sentence, but the paragraph is pretty close.
If I’m looking at a book, the first paragraph is my
test. If it doesn’t move me a little, the
book goes back on the shelf. In that
case, nothing else in the book matters.
If the reader doesn’t get past the first paragraph, then everything else
you wrote in the novel is pretty worthless.
The publisher is a little difference, but not much.
The publisher begins like the reader. They won’t usually dump a novel because of
the first word or first sentence, but you really need to gain their attention
by the end of the first paragraph. A
publisher might read a little further, but that’s just the initial scene. There’s more.
The basis of the first paragraph isn’t just as a
paragraph. The first paragraph
introduces and begins the initial scene.
If something doesn’t connect with the publisher (or reader) then you’re
done. What I mean by this is that the initial
scene from beginning to end has got to grab the attention of the
publisher. A great first paragraph with
a terrible initial scene will sink you as much as a terrible first paragraph and
a great initial scene. The threat is
that the publisher will not get much further than the first paragraph that is
if they don’t get the hook of your paragraph based on the initial scene.
The importance is not just the initial paragraph, it’s the
scene driving that paragraph. This
should obviously go back to the theme statement, which is dependent on the protagonist,
antagonist, protagonist’s helper, telic flaw, and initial setting.
Coming back to the main point. If you have a great protagonist, antagonist,
protagonist’s helper, telic flaw, and initial setting you can write a theme
statement, and you can potentially write a great initial scene.
In the end, we can figure out what makes a work have a great
plot and theme, and apply this to our writing.
The beginning of creativity is study and effort. We can use this to extrapolate to
creativity. In addition, we need to look
at recording ideas and working with ideas.
More tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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