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Saturday, December 1, 2012

Scenes - Scene Setting, Who, even more Examples

1 December 2012, Scenes - Scene Setting, Who, even more Examples

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

A scene outline is a means of writing a novel where each scene follows the other with a scene input from the previous scene and a scene output that leads to the next scene. The scenes don't necessarily have to follow directly in time and place, however they generally follow the storyline of the protagonist.

A storyline outline is a means of writing a novel where the author develops a scene outline for more than one character and bases the plot on one or more of these storyline scenes. This allows the scenes to focus on more than the protagonist. This is a very difficult means of writing. There is a strong chance of confusing your readers.

Whether you write with a scene outline or a storyline outline, you must properly develop your scenes. All novels are developed from scenes and each scene has a design similar to a novel. Every successful novel has the following basic parts:

1. The beginning
2. The rising action
3. The Climax
4. The falling action
5. The dénouement

Every scene has these parts:

1. The setting (where, what, who, when, how)
2. The connection (input)
3. The tension development
4. The release
5. The output

There are lots of approaches to scene setting. That means there are about a million plus ways you can set a scene. The main point is you have to clearly get across the where, when, who, what, and how.

Remember, use 100 to 300 words to introduce a character.  Here is the introduction of two secondary characters in Aksinya.

The nun and older woman immediately moved to Aksinya’s side.  They both curtsied. 

Freiherr Bockmann put out his hand, “Countess Golitsyna, may I introduce the Reverend Mother Kluge and Frau Drescher.  Reverend Mother and Frau Drescher, this is my niece, the Countess Aksinya Andreiovna Golitsyna.  She is the one we spoke about yesterday.”

The Reverend Mother’s wore a full habit with a wimple that only allowed her face to be seen.  The wimple flowed over her head and shoulders and was lost in the folds of her habit.  The face that showed was wrinkled, but appeared kind.  It wasn’t a hard face or a harsh one.  It seemed to be filled with a smile most of the time, like the smile that went out to Aksinya right now.  Aksinya lowered her eyes, but not her head.

Frau Drescher on the other hand displayed features of steel.  Her wire rimmed glasses sat back on her very sharp nose.  Her eyes darted constantly until they focused on a person and then they didn’t seem to move at all until the woman was fully satisfied with her scrutiny.  Frown lines marked the corners of her mouth and her eyes.  She wore a frown now and unsuccessfully attempted to turn that into a smile.   She was slightly plump and wore a very severe dress that wasn’t a habit, but might as well have been.       

The Reverend Mother wore a large cross that depended from a silver chain around her neck.  The demon eyed it then moved to the far side away from her.  The smell of sulfur increased slightly.  The Reverend Mother engulfed Aksinya in her smile, “I understand Countess that like your aunt, you wish to attend Sacré Coeur.

Again, the point is simply that when you introduce your characters (setting the who) make sure you set the who. Show us about those characters. 
I'll give you more examples, tomorrow.

My Notes: once you have a theme, you need to begin to visualize your plot, focus your theme, and define your characters. More tomorrow.

I'll move on to basic writing exercises and creativity in the near future.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:, and the individual novel websites:,,, http://www.thefoxshonor,

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