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Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 13 even more Theme and Plot

13 August 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 13 even more Theme and Plot

Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

I'm looking at science fiction and the science fiction based theme. If you are going to write science fiction, you need a science fiction based theme. I didn't repeat the definition, because I think I've made my point. I am going to expand my explanations and examples to my (as of yet) unpublished science fiction novels. This series is called The Ghost Ship Chronicles. This is a peek at the future of the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox almost 2000 years later. The Empire is gone, and in its place is the Confederation of Human Space.

Each of the novels in the Ghost Ship Chronicles is titled after a space ship. The second novel is Twilight Lamb. The theme statement for Twilight Lamb is this: Beginning from the theme statement for Athelstan Cying: the Captain's son through the help of the First Officer's daughter is becoming a success--they encounter a criminal psy organization that is using ancient psy devices to affect politics.  For those who like single word themes, this is a success concept theme.  I know this is a complex sounding theme, but you can see it is very strongly science fiction based. This is still a discovery theme.  Additionally, the theme of the second novel must take on the theme of the first novel--in such a continuation novel, anything else would be impossible. 

With the theme statement, we can build the characters and set the novel. The setting must be the future when there are space ships and psy. Through the theme statement and the first novel's theme statement, we have the Captain's son and the spirit of the ancient leader (the protagonist) (this is a character related to the times of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox). We have a protagonist's helper (the First Officer's Daughter) and now an antagonist (the organization seeking ancient psy and using them for political reasons). I mentioned that this is still a discovery novel--the spirit who is now within the Captain's son must discover his and the protagonist's helper's purpose in the world around them. The world of the Captain's son is already fully populated from the first novel. The reader discovers more of it with the spirit. The main character is Den Protania. His nemesis, Natana Kern becomes the protagonist's helper. We discover the antagonist (the Athenian Charter) in this second novel, Twilight Lamb.

These are really fun novels. I know the theme sounds kind of complex and possibly clunky, but the execution of the plot and storyline is a very smooth and exciting adventure novel. The reader discovers the world of the Family Traders and the Confederation of Human space along with the main character. Additionally, the novel has a strong romance theme. Need I write that the plot derives directly out of the theme, and the plot drives the storyline. You can't read this novel, yet, but you can read the first chapter and more about it at

Remember, I;m trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a sceince fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.

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