Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
You really can develop a theme statement using the listed elements. Here are the elements again:
The first element in a theme statement is the protagonist. This can be as simple as "the boy," the girl," "the woman," "the Captain's son," "the beautiful singer," "a girl who...," "a boy who..." and all. Let's state the protagonist in simple but specific terms.
The second element is the setting. This doesn't have to be very specific at all. If the novel is not a science fiction novel, I'd suggest the setting can be undetermined, but the setting is usually the part of the theme statement that makes the theme a science fiction theme. Typical settings are: on a spaceship, on a planet, during a planetary war, during a planet exploratory mission, etc.
The third element is a verb or action statement. Examples are: discovered, fought, rescued, found, investigated, invented, and all. The point is to have the protagonist do something in a scientific setting. This sets the theme statement in a form that can be turned into a plot.
The fourth element is an antagonist. This is not necessary, but if you can include the foil to the protagonist that's a step forward.
The fifth element, and optional, is the protagonist's helper.
If you develop or have a theme statement with these elements, you can immediately begin to flesh out the plot. This is where I break with the single word theme folks. Sure, you can have a single word theme, but what does it get you--nothing. A theme statement, as described above, provides the beginning of your plot. With a theme statement, you have a protagonist, a setting, and an action of progress. If you add in an antagonist and the protagonist's helper, you have all the elements of a plot. The theme statement isn't the plot--it is simply the basis and beginning of the plot. The next step is to flesh out the characters and develop the setting.
Remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com, www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, thefoxshonor, aseasonofhonor.
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