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Tuesday, June 21, 2016

Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 802, Climax Examples, Warrior of Light

21 June 2016, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 802, Climax Examples, Warrior of Light

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:

1.  The initial scene (the beginning)

2.  The rising action

3.  The climax

4.  The falling action

5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my 26th novel, working title, Shape, proposed title, Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, is this: Mrs. Lyons captures a shape-shifting girl in her pantry and rehabilitates her.

I just started writing my 27th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  

Here is the cover proposal for Essie: Enchantment and the Aos SiEssie is my 26th novel.

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28th novel, working title Red Sonja. 

I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 

Scene development:

1.  Scene input (easy)

2.  Scene output (a little harder)

3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)

4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)

5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)

6.  Release (climax of creative elements)


How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.


Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.


I’ll try not to introduce spoilers.  You can’t read these novels yet, but it’s worth writing about the process of developing the climax for them.  I have two contracted novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  These are supposed to be published in a three-in-one with Aegypt and individually.  The economy has delayed their publication.  These first three novels are called Ancient Light.  They include Aegypt, Sister of Light, and Sister of Darkness.  They don’t end there.  I wrote eight total novels.  Aegypt begins in 1926 and the last one, Warrior of Darkness ends in the 1990s.  I’ll write about the climax of these novels.  The seventh novel in the series is Warrior of Light.


Daniel Long is finally a free man.  His father was promoted and moved to a new neighborhood, and Danny is going to a new school in the sixth form, The Grey Coat School.  What is odd is that everyone in his new neighborhood works for the government and most of them work for Mr. Lyons.  In the neighborhood, Daniel also meets two beautiful young women, Sveta and Klava.  We met Sveta and Klava in Children of Light and Darkness. 


Daniel is the protagonist in this novel.  His external and internal telic flaw is that he has been identified as a warrior for Sveta or Klava and they are training him to this position.  The expected climax is that he will become the warrior of one or the other.  The ultimate problem with this is that to become a warrior, he must choose to marry and the woman must choose him.  We aren’t talking about normal human affairs because Sveta and Klava are not normal human girls.  This is a very complex and fun novel.  Eventually, we have Sveta and Klava in China and Daniel chasing them.  They want to find their parents.  Daniel just wants to complete his training—an become a warrior to one of these delightful young women.  The unexpected climax is how everything plays out.  The action is indeed in the climax.  Remember, the climax should be action oriented, be expected but with an unexpected resolution, and resolve the telic flaw of the protagonist.   


My next as yet uncontracted novel is Warrior of Darkness.           


More tomorrow.

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