20 August 2018, Writing - part
x591, Developing Skills, How to Suspend Disbelief, Worldview Reflection,
Creation, and Reproduction
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but my primary
publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t succeed in the past business
and publishing environment. I'll keep you informed, but I need a new publisher. More
information can be found at www.ancientlight.com. Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy
them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in
installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in
addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel
was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and
tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this
blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll
keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production
schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the
writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage
of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a
novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2.
Develop a theme statement (initial
setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3.
Write the initial scene (identify
the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.
Write the next scene(s) to the
climax (rising action)
5.
Write the climax scene
6.
Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose
Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around
dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working
title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining
idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea
with a theme statement. Since I’m
writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the
X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns
about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: TBD
Here
is the scene development outline:
1.
Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2.
Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3.
Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and
develop the tension and release.
4.
Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5.
Write the release
6.
Write the kicker
Today: Suspension of
disbelief is the characteristic of writing that pulls the reader into the world
of the novel in such a way that the reader would rather face the world of the
novel rather than the real world—at least while reading. If this occurs while not reading, it is
potentially a mental problem. To achieve
the suspension of disbelief your writing has to meet some basic criteria and contain
some strong inspiration. If you want to
call the inspiration creativity, that works too. Here is a list of the basic criteria to hope
to achieve some degree of suspension of disbelief.
1.
Reasonably written in standard
English
2.
No glaring logical fallacies
3.
Reasoned worldview
4.
Creative and interesting topic
5.
A Plot
6.
Entertaining
7.
POV
Worldview is the most important
feature of any fantasy, science fiction, or magical realism novel. In fact, I could argue that worldview is the
most important feature of every novel.
Novels that attempt to show the
world of the time are a reflected worldview.
Novels that attempt to show the ideas of the time are a reproduced
worldview. Novels that build their own
worldview are a created worldview.
The created worldview is, of course,
science fiction, certain fantasy, and alternative world fiction. A created worldview is one where the writer
develops the world or entire universe from pieces of the reflected and
reproduced, but then extrapolated and or interpolates to build an entirely
different and created worldview.
I hope you are familiar with these
types of novels. Harry Potty is this
type of novel. The worldview of Harry
Potty does not resemble any reproduced or reflected worldview—it is its own
world and worldview. The Sparkly
Vampires are a created worldview—the vampires do not match any concept of
mythical or literary vampire. The Hungry
Games is a created worldview. In fact,
as I noted, most all science fiction is a created worldview. Alternative world or reality is obviously a
created worldview. Much of fantasy is
created worldview, but there are some distinctions.
I would call most of my writing
reproduced worldview. I try to meld myth
and known or believed ideas in my novels to the reflected worldview of the
times. For example, my vampires act like
Bram Stoker’s vampires with just a few embellishments from other myth or
literature. My magic systems are based
on James Frazier’s Golden Bough and other
accepted ideas on magic. I didn’t invent
the magic systems in my novels, I reproduced the ideas that people have about
them. Likewise, my characters are based on
when people know about myths and mythical beings. If you can make a historical google search on
your characters, settings, and events and find nonfiction based answers or historical
answers, you are likely writing reproduced or reflected worldview. If you can’t, you are in a created worldview.
Of course, my science fiction is all
created worldview. Just to be clear,
created worldview is always based on the current reflected or reproduced
worldview, but just extrapolated and or interpolated. For example, most every author starts with
their conception of the modern world and extrapolates that worldview to develop
their science fiction universe.
The author of Harry Potty started with
a reproduced modern worldview and then injected the interpolated magical system
with all its stuff. Many of the
creatures are reproduced worldview. Some
are not.
With these basics of worldview, we
can now discuss how to ensure the worldview doesn’t cast the reader out of the
suspension of dis belief.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my
author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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