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Writing - part xx231 Writing a Novel, Protagonists Plots and Theme Klava Calloway

21 May 2020, Writing - part xx231 Writing a Novel, Protagonists Plots and Theme Klava Calloway

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but my primary publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t succeed in the past business and publishing environment.  I’ll keep you informed, but I need a new publisher.  More information can be found at  Check out my novels—I think you’ll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I’ll keep you informed along the way.

Today’s Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing websites
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:

1.     Design the initial scene
2.     Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.     Research as required
b.     Develop the initial setting
c.     Develop the characters
d.     Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3.     Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.     Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5.     Write the climax scene
6.     Write the falling action scene(s)
7.     Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.  The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.  
Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective
Cover Proposal
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I finished my 29th novel, working title Detective.  I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter
How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

For novel 30:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

For novel 31:  Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events. 

Here is the scene development outline:

1. Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
4. Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the release
6. Write the kicker
Today:  Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a novel?  I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel together.  We can start with developing an idea then move into the details of the writing. 

To start a novel, I picture an initial scene.  I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial scene.  I get the idea for an initial scene from all kinds of sources.  To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene. 

1.     Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the protagonist’s helper
2.     Action point in the plot
3.     Buildup to an exciting scene
4.     Indirect introduction of the protagonist

Ideas.  We need ideas.  Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist and the telic flaw.  Ideas don’t come fully armed from the mind of Zeus.  We need to cultivate ideas. 

1.     Read novels. 
2.     Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about. 
3.     Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
4.     Study.
5.     Teach. 
6.     Make the catharsis. 
7.     Write.

The development of ideas is based on study and research, but it is also based on creativity.  Creativity is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form.  It is a reflection of something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect).  Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and producing.

If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative.  Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form.  Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way. 

So, modern characters must look like the reader’s impression of the protagonist.  This is an interesting problem as culture and society change as does the impression of the readers.         

Here is the list of characteristics for great protagonists (this is based on the concept of a Romantic protagonist):

1.     Hero, independent, and individualistic – characters who truly risk their lives for others.
2.     From the common ilk – as opposed to the nobility and wealth.
3.     Educated – both seeking education and study and loving to read and learn.
4.     Focus on the inner world of the protagonist – the mind and motivation of the protagonist.
5.     Celebration of nature, beauty, and imagination – the expression of the mind of the protagonist.
6.     Rejection of industrialization and social convention – from urban to rural.
7.     Idealization of woman, children, and rural life.
8.     Inclusion of supernatural or mythological elements.
9.     Inclusion of historical elements.
10.  Frequent use of personification.
11.  Emphasis on individual experience of the sublime.
12.  Discovery and skills—the protagonist finds his or her special skills and abilities and uses them to resolve the telic flaw.
13.  The readers agree with the mind (thoughts and decisions) of the protagonist

I added the last statement, but really this last statement is a direct reflection of 4, 11, and 12. 

My ultimate point is that first I develop a great protagonist and the plot and theme of the novel I want to write comes directly out of that protagonist.  Every great protagonist comes with his or her own telic flaw.

Yesterday, I gave you an example of Azure Rose from my novel, Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.  I showed how she was a Romantic protagonist and how she herself resulted in a plot and theme for the novel.  In other words, I didn’t develop a plot or a theme first, I developed a great protagonist and found the telic flaw, plot, and theme from her revelation.  Azure Rose came with a plot and a theme.  I’ve done this before and at the risk of repeating myself, I’ll do this a couple of more times or more.  Here is a list of my completed novels and protagonists:

A Season of Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox III), published, Shawn du Locke
The Fox’s Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox II), published, Devon Rathenberg
The End of Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox I), published, John-Mark
Antebellum, not published, Heather Sybil Roberts
Aegypt, published, Paul Bolong
Centurion, published, Centurion Abenadar
Athelstan Cying, not published, Den Protania
Twilight Lamb, not published, Den Protania
Regia Anglorum, not published, Nikita Protania
The Second Mission, published, Alan Fisher
Sister of Light, not published, Leora Bolang
Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth, not published, Angela Matheson
Sister of Darkness, not published, Leora Bolang
Shadow of Darkness, not published, Lumière Bolang
Shadow of Light, not published, Lumière Bolang
Children of Light and Darkness, not published, Kathrin McClellan
Warrior of Light, not published, David Long
Shadowed Vale, not published, Nikita Protania
Warrior of Darkness, not published, Klava Calloway
Dana-ana: Enchantment and the Maiden, not published, Byron Macintyre
Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon, not published, Aksinya
Khione: Enchantment and the Fox, not published, Khione
Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire, not published, George Mardling
Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer, not published, Lilly
Escape from Freedom, not published, Scott Phillips
Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, not published, Essie
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse, not published, Shiggy
Deirdre: Enchantment and the School, not published, Deirdre Calloway
Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective, not published, Azure Rose

Warrior of Darkness, is currently not published.  The protagonist is Klava Calloway.  Warrior of Darkness is my last official novel in the Aegypt novels, dubbed Ancient Light novels by my now out of business publisher.  Klava Calloway is another excellent example of how a protagonist defines the telic flaw, plot, and theme.

Warrior of Darkness is the final official novel in the continuing saga of the Bolang family that started in Aegypt.  The protagonist is Klava Calloway who is the grand child of Paul and Leora Bolang and also the Goddess of Darkness in her time.  This time the setting of the novel is Northern Ireland and Klava Calloway is saving lives by fighting the evil of the PIRA (Provisional Irish Republican Army).  PIRA is being supported by the Soviets in the USSR.  The times are real, the incidents are real, and they are mostly terror bombings against civilian targets.  This is the setting of the novel.  The protagonist is different.

The Bolang family came from a French military background.  During World War Two, they became involved in British and French intelligence.  Paul and Leora with Bruce Lyons were spies in Nazi Germany.  After the war, Paul and Leora worked with Bruce in British intelligence.  Their children all followed them into British or French intelligence or the military.  Leora was the original Goddess of Light brought into the world through the actions of Paul Bolang.  Their children included children, twins, who followed in Leora and her sister’s heritage as a Goddess of Light or Darkness. 

Klava Calloway is a Goddess of Darkness.  She isn’t evil, she controls darkness, and she works for British intelligence, the Organization to be specific.  At the beginning of the novel, she is assigned to Northern Ireland to counter the PIRA.  Klava Calloway uses her powers to cause PIRA bombs to fail.  The problem is that the mechanism she uses the bombs to fail causes the power of the explosion to go back to the originators of the bombs.  Since the Soviet Union is providing the bombs to the PIRA, the explosions come back to the men and women who touched and set the bombs, that means people including children occasionally die when Klava Calloway stops a bomb in Ireland.  The forces of the West are willing to accept this little problem-- Klava Calloway is also, but she mourns in her soul the few innocents who must die to save many others.  This gets very deep into supernatural aspects of Klava Calloway’s power, but this is who she is.  I’ve told you what takes chapters in the novel to reveal.  Klava Calloway’s problem becomes the fact that she also opposes PIRA magic users.  One of the magic users has his magical equipment destroyed and he goes after Klava Calloway personally.  Further, Klava Calloway is training a priestess—it’s a girl from the street.

In going after her personally, Klava Calloway is injured and overwhelmed by a failure of a bomb attack.  In anguish, she resurrects her priestess.  The magic user is ensorcelled by another Irish god and rapes Klava Calloway.  The problem with this isn’t just moral or criminal, the problem is that when an unbound goddess takes a mate (has sex) that man becomes her warrior and is bound to her for life. 

So here is the telic flaw in this novel, Klava Calloway’s telic flaw: she must convince her warrior to accept his fate and hers.  Did I mention, that their forced liaison resulted in pregnancy?  Thus Klava Calloway must do something about her warrior.  She must take care of another problem caused by the failure—her priestess whom she resurrected.  In other words, Klava Calloway has goddess problems, legal problems, intelligence agency problems, and mother problems.  There is more, but that is the plot.  The theme is a redemption theme based on Klava’s problems.  So, let’s look at Klava as a protagonist.

Klava is a hero from the beginning.  She is an independent and individualistic hero of epic proportions.  Klava, though a goddess, is a person from the norm.  She just has a different kind of occupation—goddess.  She is educated and a big focus of the novel is on education and on intelligence agency education.  The inner world of the protagonist is what moves the entire novel.  This is a very deep novel on redemption at many levels. 

The celebration of nature, beauty, and imagination mixes with rural, women, children, and not so much rural life as urban life on the streets.  This moves into the idealization of the rural by comparison. 

The inclusion of the supernatural, mythological, and historical are obvious from Klava’s description.  The novel isn’t so much about the discovery of skills although skill discovery is part of the novel. 

Do I have to mention again the telic flaw, plot, and theme coming out of Klava Calloway?  These exude from the protagonist.  This is a very fun and entertaining novel.    

I hope you can see that the entire plot, telic flaw, and theme came out of the development of this character.  This is exactly what I mean when I write that the plot, theme, and telic flaw comes directly out of the protagonist.

Ultimately, the point is that we need to keep our readers content and pleased with our characters while presenting the revelation of the protagonist and the plot.    

The beginning of creativity is study and effort.  We can use this to extrapolate to creativity.  In addition, we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.    
More tomorrow.

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