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Monday, November 12, 2012

Scenes - Scene Setting, even more Time Examples

12 November 2012, Scenes - Scene Setting, even more Time Examples

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

A scene outline is a means of writing a novel where each scene follows the other with a scene input from the previous scene and a scene output that leads to the next scene. The scenes don't necessarily have to follow directly in time and place, however they generally follow the storyline of the protagonist.

A storyline outline is a means of writing a novel where the author develops a scene outline for more than one character and bases the plot on one or more of these storyline scenes. This allows the scenes to focus on more than the protagonist. This is a very difficult means of writing. There is a strong chance of confusing your readers.

Whether you write with a scene outline or a storyline outline, you must properly develop your scenes. All novels are developed from scenes and each scene has a design similar to a novel. Every successful novel has the following basic parts:

1. The beginning
2. The rising action
3. The Climax
4. The falling action
5. The dénouement

Every scene has these parts:

1. The setting (where, what, who, when, how)
2. The connection (input)
3. The tension development
4. The release
5. The output

There are lots of approaches to scene setting. That means there are about a million plus ways you can set a scene. The main point is you have to clearly get across the where, when, who, what, and how.

There are lots of other ways to set time markers (set time) in a scene.  I showed you the examples of a letter and a note yesterday.  This is one of my favorite methods of setting absolute time in a scene.  Readers really like this method, and it is considered a great breaking type method in a novel.  That is, it provides a large pause in the writing.

Another similar means of setting the time is through a newspaper article or heading.  For example, Jane picked up a copy of the San Fransisco Chronicle.  June 28, 1935...  This doesn't pause the scene, but it places a historical artifact as the setting marker.  You can also use anything else that has a date on it.  In a modern novel, you can use an expiration date.  For example, Jake picked up the can and read the expiration date: June 2010.  He did a little mental math, five months out of date.  He tossed it in the garbage.  This type of marker allows you to put in some character description and action.  Don't get stupid and put this in the wrong time.  Expiration dates were unknown until just recently in human history.

You could use a prescription in a similar manner.  There are other methods too.  We'll move to diaries tomorrow.

My Notes: once you have a theme, you need to begin to visualize your plot, focus your theme, and define your characters. More tomorrow.

I'll move on to basic writing exercises and creativity in the near future.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:, and the individual novel websites:,,, http://www.thefoxshonor,

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