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Monday, November 26, 2012

Scenes - Scene Setting, Who

26 November 2012, Scenes - Scene Setting, Who

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

A scene outline is a means of writing a novel where each scene follows the other with a scene input from the previous scene and a scene output that leads to the next scene. The scenes don't necessarily have to follow directly in time and place, however they generally follow the storyline of the protagonist.

A storyline outline is a means of writing a novel where the author develops a scene outline for more than one character and bases the plot on one or more of these storyline scenes. This allows the scenes to focus on more than the protagonist. This is a very difficult means of writing. There is a strong chance of confusing your readers.

Whether you write with a scene outline or a storyline outline, you must properly develop your scenes. All novels are developed from scenes and each scene has a design similar to a novel. Every successful novel has the following basic parts:

1. The beginning
2. The rising action
3. The Climax
4. The falling action
5. The dénouement

Every scene has these parts:

1. The setting (where, what, who, when, how)
2. The connection (input)
3. The tension development
4. The release
5. The output

There are lots of approaches to scene setting. That means there are about a million plus ways you can set a scene. The main point is you have to clearly get across the where, when, who, what, and how.

I wrote about the time and place--that is setting your scenes in the when and where.  These are critical parts of scene setting and they are the parts that many modern writers miss.  I would advocate that if you start your readers on a barren stage, you are not using the medium to the maximum extent possible.

The primary purpose of fiction writing is to entertain.  So, if your stage is bare, you aren't entertaining.  I know, you will say, there are empty stage theaters, but in an "empty stage theater" the actors must bear the brunt of all the description.  This is like writing an entire novel of only conversation.  I know this has been tried and it has been done, but I think it is stupid.  It is like writing on a keyboard with one hand tied behind your back--or worse. 

If you give up on narrative, you can only show through conversation.  If you give up on conversation, you can only show through description.  Either choice leads to a significant decrease in the way you can get your theme and plot across.

The point I'm trying to get through to you is that you must focus your scenes with the setting and time and place (when and where) are not enough.  The next step is the who--that is the description of the characters in the scene.  I'll get to that, tomorrow.

My Notes: once you have a theme, you need to begin to visualize your plot, focus your theme, and define your characters. More tomorrow.

I'll move on to basic writing exercises and creativity in the near future.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:, and the individual novel websites:,,, http://www.thefoxshonor,

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