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Tuesday, November 13, 2012

Scenes - Scene Setting, Writing in Writing Examples

13 November 2012, Scenes - Scene Setting, Writing in Writing Examples

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

A scene outline is a means of writing a novel where each scene follows the other with a scene input from the previous scene and a scene output that leads to the next scene. The scenes don't necessarily have to follow directly in time and place, however they generally follow the storyline of the protagonist.

A storyline outline is a means of writing a novel where the author develops a scene outline for more than one character and bases the plot on one or more of these storyline scenes. This allows the scenes to focus on more than the protagonist. This is a very difficult means of writing. There is a strong chance of confusing your readers.

Whether you write with a scene outline or a storyline outline, you must properly develop your scenes. All novels are developed from scenes and each scene has a design similar to a novel. Every successful novel has the following basic parts:

1. The beginning
2. The rising action
3. The Climax
4. The falling action
5. The dénouement

Every scene has these parts:

1. The setting (where, what, who, when, how)
2. The connection (input)
3. The tension development
4. The release
5. The output

There are lots of approaches to scene setting. That means there are about a million plus ways you can set a scene. The main point is you have to clearly get across the where, when, who, what, and how.

A diary or a personal note can also provide a time marker that allows you to set the time in a scene. All of these methods are used too seldom by authors. They also provide a pause or break in the writing.

You might ask why have a pause or a break in your writing? When you design a scene, the purpose is to entertain. If you have a very action oriented scene, the natural pause is when the action stops. This isn't true in a less action oriented scene. In such a scene, it many times makes sense to break up the action (lack of action) somehow. You can move from conversation to description or from conversation to action description, but this may not fit the time and place. You can very easily have a character read or write. The reading or writing can be conveyed through a note, diary, letter, newspaper, table card, calling card, etc. This provides a natural break in the writing.

I use these types of techniques more than once a novel. Many novels fit them very well. For example, in my unpublished novel, Shadow of Light, the main character is an agent who routinely receives messages from her boss as classified notes. These happen at least twice a chapter. Use written sources in your novels to set the time in the scenes, to convey information, and as a natural break in the writing.

I'll write more, tomorrow.

My Notes: once you have a theme, you need to begin to visualize your plot, focus your theme, and define your characters. More tomorrow.

I'll move on to basic writing exercises and creativity in the near future.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:, and the individual novel websites:,,, http://www.thefoxshonor,

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