2 March 2020, Writing - part xx151 Writing a Novel, More Like Romantic
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Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1. Design the initial scene
2. Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a. Research as required
b. Develop the initial setting
c. Develop the characters
d. Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3. Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4. Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5. Write the climax scene
6. Write the falling action scene(s)
7. Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement. Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events.
Here is the scene development outline:
1. Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
4. Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the release
6. Write the kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a novel? I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel together. We can start with developing an idea then move into the details of the writing.
To start a novel, I picture an initial scene. I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial scene. I get the idea for an initial scene from all kinds of sources. To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene.
1. Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the protagonist’s helper
2. Action point in the plot
3. Buildup to an exciting scene
4. Indirect introduction of the protagonist
Ideas. We need ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We need to cultivate ideas.
1. Read novels.
2. Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about.
3. Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
6. Make the catharsis.
The development of ideas is based on study and research, but it is also based on creativity. Creativity is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created with ties to the history, schience, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and producing.
If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative. Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way. Let’s look at an example.
The writer must create like an artist with the manipulation of writing (language) in the world through hard work to present something that is not natural, common, or previously existing in the world, and adds beauty to the world and humanity.
Pathos is the name of the game. The bully with a gun isn’t a good protagonist. The intellectual girl with a gun is. The real world isn’t fair and many times isn’t just. In novels, the world can be fair and just, and true justice can be meted out to the evil while the good are rewarded. If this seems like the basis for a plot it is.
So, modern characters must look like the reader’s impression of the protagonist. This is an interesting problem as culture and society change as does the impression of the readers.
I’m not so sure I like the current crop of protagonists I’m seeing in many novels. I want my protagonists to be sure of themselves on some level and not sniveling sots. In fact, we used to call weak protagonists ambivalent. Most readers don’t like ambivalent protagonists, but we see so many of them in movies and in novels. What is happening?
It really could be a new trend in writing and reading, but then again it could be the publisher’s culture getting in the way of good writing. Publishers do hold the upper hand. We expect them to make decisions based on the market for novels and to make good decisions. We should also know, they make decisions based on their perceptions and preconceptions. If they think readers want a pouty wizard, the readers will get a pouty wizard. If the book sells, all the well.
I don’t like pouty wizards. I want thinking, reading, logical (as must as possible) wizards. I really don’t want to deal with teenaged angst. In fact, one of the main selling points for Nancy Drew and the Hardy Boys was that kids and adults didn’t have to deal with the teenaged angst. Nancy and the Hardys were not complete humans but they were whole humans. They acted in a way that reasonable people and teens should be expected to act—they solved crimes instead of committing them.
Today, you are more likely to find a young adult novel where the protagonist and other positive characters (so to speak) are intentionally breaking the rules without much consequence. Instead of holding up ideals, they are figuring out how to overcome ideals without getting caught. Perhaps I’m being a bit sarcastic here, but I really don’t like these kinds of characters. The fact I have to deal with them in my entertaining novels irritates me.
I’ll continue to recommend writing characters your readers will enjoy. I’m a reader, and I think my opinion of entertainment matters. If you feel as uncomfortable as I do about some protagonists, then make sure you write protagonists that make you feel comfortable. Some might complain that isn’t reality.
Novels aren’t reality. Novels are for entertainment and never forget it. If you don’t work to write entertaining novels, you will never sell a novel. You can populate your novels with realistic characters and a realistic protagonist—you just need to understand what that looks like in an entertaining novel. Realistic looks like a Romantic protagonist.
The more Romantic, the more realistic your protagonist will look and appeal to your readers. We aren’t writing to push the comfort level of our readers—we are writing to provide a level of comfort to our readers. Unless you are into tragedy. Hey tragedy can potentially sell—as long as it is entertaining.
I’ve gone through the litany of the Romantic protagonist before. We might as well look at it again—or at least parts of it.
So just what kinds of characters should we be developing?
As we look for creative ideas, and I believe creative ideas begin with creative characters, we should look at just what excites and interests us. How can we project what we like and enjoy into a great character.
Let’s look at the other suggestions and see how we can use them to develop entertaining writing.
The beginning of creativity is study and effort. We can use this to extrapolate to creativity. In addition, we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.
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