4 January 2014, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 157 Extrapolating Military Technology, Conclusions Communications
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The major areas in warfare technology are:
1. Software
2. Weapons
Heavy Weapons
3. Countermeasures
4. Defense
5. Communications
6. Robots
7. Vehicles
8. Environments (personal equipment)
9. Costs
Communications are a necessary part of military operations. They are and will become more and more important in civilian operations. Communications likely are the foundation of any and all human advanced interactions. That is why your future extrapolation must consider them properly. It really isn't good enough, at this point for your communications to be cell phones and radios--that is for technology much more than 100 years in the future. What the communications will look like are for your extrapolation to determine.
Further, future military communications are both necessary and will be jammed and intercepted. Your plot and themes will be able to use this information to determine outcomes and add complexity to your future worlds. Communications do add complexity and allow integrations that are not capable without them. There is much more to describe about communications and their use in all novels--but I'll leave that to another time. I'll move on to robots.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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Monday, December 30, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 152 Extrapolating Military Technology, yet more Communications
30 December 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 152 Extrapolating Military Technology, yet more Communications
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The major areas in warfare technology are:
1. Software
2. Weapons
Heavy Weapons
3. Countermeasures
4. Defense
5. Communications
6. Robots
7. Vehicles
8. Environments (personal equipment)
9. Costs
Interception of communications is one of the best ways to gather intel. Your enemy will spill his guts on a radio the way they won't anywhere else. That goes for phones, texts, emails, etc. Anything but face to face. For some reason, face to face, it is hard to use social conditioning or social manipulation, but through other communications, it is easy. For that reason, encrypting communications is a must in the military and likely a must in the civil world. There are just too many people (and governments) who want a piece of your action.
To protect your intel via communications, you need some method of encryption. In the old days, they used codes or obscure languages. Both simple codes and obscure languages will work in a low tech environment, but not in a high tech world. Assume at some point that computers can decipher almost any language or code. The trick then is to have codes too difficult for a computer to decipher. This is possible, but as computers get better codes also get better--and more difficult to unravel. The future will see other methods for encoding and sending jam-proof messages. I'll discuss some.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The major areas in warfare technology are:
1. Software
2. Weapons
Heavy Weapons
3. Countermeasures
4. Defense
5. Communications
6. Robots
7. Vehicles
8. Environments (personal equipment)
9. Costs
Interception of communications is one of the best ways to gather intel. Your enemy will spill his guts on a radio the way they won't anywhere else. That goes for phones, texts, emails, etc. Anything but face to face. For some reason, face to face, it is hard to use social conditioning or social manipulation, but through other communications, it is easy. For that reason, encrypting communications is a must in the military and likely a must in the civil world. There are just too many people (and governments) who want a piece of your action.
To protect your intel via communications, you need some method of encryption. In the old days, they used codes or obscure languages. Both simple codes and obscure languages will work in a low tech environment, but not in a high tech world. Assume at some point that computers can decipher almost any language or code. The trick then is to have codes too difficult for a computer to decipher. This is possible, but as computers get better codes also get better--and more difficult to unravel. The future will see other methods for encoding and sending jam-proof messages. I'll discuss some.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Thursday, November 21, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 113 more Extrapolating Military Technology
21 November 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 113 more Extrapolating Military Technology
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The future of warfare is electronics--let's be very clear about that. The major areas are software, weapons, countermeasures, defense, communications, robots, vehicles, and environments. All of these will be driven by electronics and electronics will be the power of future warfare. Now, don't get sloppy. People will not become less irritating, antagonistic, or warlike--weapons will just become more and more dangerous and make warfare a greater tax on people and economies. We will see a reduction in warfare just as we did with the invention of the atomic bomb. When warfare becomes too dangerous, people decide to reduce their antagonistic tendencies.
Still warfare will continue to exist especially at a low level. This is what we see today--many small wars and not big ones. Electronics will tend to make warfare less destructive to the individual and more destructive to society. For example, cyberwarfare will make attacks on a nation both undetectable and possibly indefensible. If you don't know you are being attacked and by whom, you can't respond and you may not realize you are being attacked.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The future of warfare is electronics--let's be very clear about that. The major areas are software, weapons, countermeasures, defense, communications, robots, vehicles, and environments. All of these will be driven by electronics and electronics will be the power of future warfare. Now, don't get sloppy. People will not become less irritating, antagonistic, or warlike--weapons will just become more and more dangerous and make warfare a greater tax on people and economies. We will see a reduction in warfare just as we did with the invention of the atomic bomb. When warfare becomes too dangerous, people decide to reduce their antagonistic tendencies.
Still warfare will continue to exist especially at a low level. This is what we see today--many small wars and not big ones. Electronics will tend to make warfare less destructive to the individual and more destructive to society. For example, cyberwarfare will make attacks on a nation both undetectable and possibly indefensible. If you don't know you are being attacked and by whom, you can't respond and you may not realize you are being attacked.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Friday, November 15, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 107 more Counterculture
15 November 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 107 more Counterculture
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Perhaps we have crossed the point already. In the past, when you went into the USSR or into modern China, you would get your tags. They usually gave each foreigner two--more if you were valuable. China does it all the time. In the USA, what if everyone has their NSA tag. The problem in the USA is we are finding that it isn't the foreigners, it is everyone. Writers have been contemplating this possibility in future countries--no one could imagine the possibility in a nation that isn't supposed to be a tyranny.
The US Supreme Court ruled that the government can't look through your walls or covered windows, but they can look through your open windows. Did someone forget to tell them, they can't listen to your phones, read your mail or email, or record your finances without a warrant. Note, that because of taxation, they have every right (so they claim) to check and record your finances. Because of potential terror activity, they justify strip searches of citizens without any probable cause. They seem to imagine there is probable cause because you are alive and not dead.
In reality, we are facing the same kinds of tyranny authors imagined in the past, but we are really experiencing it. It is a benevolent dictator who watches and records your every move--for what purpose. There is a load of information for your next book, but it may be a help-me guide to how to protect yourself and your privacy from the technologically superior government.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Perhaps we have crossed the point already. In the past, when you went into the USSR or into modern China, you would get your tags. They usually gave each foreigner two--more if you were valuable. China does it all the time. In the USA, what if everyone has their NSA tag. The problem in the USA is we are finding that it isn't the foreigners, it is everyone. Writers have been contemplating this possibility in future countries--no one could imagine the possibility in a nation that isn't supposed to be a tyranny.
The US Supreme Court ruled that the government can't look through your walls or covered windows, but they can look through your open windows. Did someone forget to tell them, they can't listen to your phones, read your mail or email, or record your finances without a warrant. Note, that because of taxation, they have every right (so they claim) to check and record your finances. Because of potential terror activity, they justify strip searches of citizens without any probable cause. They seem to imagine there is probable cause because you are alive and not dead.
In reality, we are facing the same kinds of tyranny authors imagined in the past, but we are really experiencing it. It is a benevolent dictator who watches and records your every move--for what purpose. There is a load of information for your next book, but it may be a help-me guide to how to protect yourself and your privacy from the technologically superior government.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Wednesday, November 13, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 105 and more Subversion, Economics, and Technology
13 November 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 105 and more Subversion, Economics, and Technology
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
A great science fiction theme along these lines would be how to limit government to prevent the use f technology to spy on its own citizens. Perhaps you imagine that leaps in technology give the common person little power in the overall mix--my point is that science fiction authors should be giving us the means to counter government overreach.
How can you limit the government so it doesn't abuse its powers. The Shockwave Rider by Brunner gave us some ideas on the how. The main character in that novel made a computer virus to take over the spy apparatus. The novel also was the model that led to the first real computer virus. Viruses are likely not the appropriate solution--notice how viruses have been contained in the last 10 years. But computer programs as well as legislative mechanisms will be part of the solution. It would also be a great thing if people valued freedom as much now as they did in the past. It is kind of difficult to write about freedom when a majority of the people are clamoring for limits on their freedom. Since many of the classic science fiction novels are about fighting tyranny, newer novels should give ideas of how to fight information tyranny or perhaps computer tyranny.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
A great science fiction theme along these lines would be how to limit government to prevent the use f technology to spy on its own citizens. Perhaps you imagine that leaps in technology give the common person little power in the overall mix--my point is that science fiction authors should be giving us the means to counter government overreach.
How can you limit the government so it doesn't abuse its powers. The Shockwave Rider by Brunner gave us some ideas on the how. The main character in that novel made a computer virus to take over the spy apparatus. The novel also was the model that led to the first real computer virus. Viruses are likely not the appropriate solution--notice how viruses have been contained in the last 10 years. But computer programs as well as legislative mechanisms will be part of the solution. It would also be a great thing if people valued freedom as much now as they did in the past. It is kind of difficult to write about freedom when a majority of the people are clamoring for limits on their freedom. Since many of the classic science fiction novels are about fighting tyranny, newer novels should give ideas of how to fight information tyranny or perhaps computer tyranny.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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Tuesday, November 12, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 104 more Subversion, Economics, and Technology
12 November 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 104 more Subversion, Economics, and Technology
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
We can already see that the greater the technology, the greater the power to snoop on citizens and potentially to control them. There is no benevolent government--at least not within the imagination or reality of humankind. Governments are never good, except to those who control them or have power in them. The future will be stark choices between giving more power to government or reigning government in and taking its power. The science fiction writer can play all day with different types of government and levels of government control. I think the science fiction author is at his/her best when writing about stark contrasts in governmental systems and power. It is easier to see abuses that way.
As we already saw, technology increases best under a free market with freedom and lots of money with a strong degree of wealth. Technology does not increase very well under controlled markets with little money, controlling government, and limited wealth. The contrast for a science fiction author should be obvious. Now, you just have to take advantage of this reality.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
We can already see that the greater the technology, the greater the power to snoop on citizens and potentially to control them. There is no benevolent government--at least not within the imagination or reality of humankind. Governments are never good, except to those who control them or have power in them. The future will be stark choices between giving more power to government or reigning government in and taking its power. The science fiction writer can play all day with different types of government and levels of government control. I think the science fiction author is at his/her best when writing about stark contrasts in governmental systems and power. It is easier to see abuses that way.
As we already saw, technology increases best under a free market with freedom and lots of money with a strong degree of wealth. Technology does not increase very well under controlled markets with little money, controlling government, and limited wealth. The contrast for a science fiction author should be obvious. Now, you just have to take advantage of this reality.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Tuesday, October 22, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 83 even more Communications
22 October 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 83 even more Communications
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
What will communications look like in the future. Right now we are seeing the integration of wearable devices. Dick Tracy's watch is about to come to your wrist. This integrates communication to a fixed device. Since cell phones are already taking over as clocks, address books, note takers, music devices, books, video devices, etc. the future is pretty easy to see.
The next step in wearable devices is the Google glass (or facsimile). From wearable integration, we are moving to sense enhancement. Eyes that can see, record, and report things that are not otherwise in sight is the visual part of Google glass. Hearing will fit in the Google glass headphones--again, this is hearing what is not currently in the environment. Finally, speaking. With seeing, hearing, and speaking, I can have a complete communications device that is fully integrated to the human and yet that is wearable.
The next step will be wearable devices that are more fully integrated in the human bio system. Can you say Google contacts with ear inserts. The next level is fully biological.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
What will communications look like in the future. Right now we are seeing the integration of wearable devices. Dick Tracy's watch is about to come to your wrist. This integrates communication to a fixed device. Since cell phones are already taking over as clocks, address books, note takers, music devices, books, video devices, etc. the future is pretty easy to see.
The next step in wearable devices is the Google glass (or facsimile). From wearable integration, we are moving to sense enhancement. Eyes that can see, record, and report things that are not otherwise in sight is the visual part of Google glass. Hearing will fit in the Google glass headphones--again, this is hearing what is not currently in the environment. Finally, speaking. With seeing, hearing, and speaking, I can have a complete communications device that is fully integrated to the human and yet that is wearable.
The next step will be wearable devices that are more fully integrated in the human bio system. Can you say Google contacts with ear inserts. The next level is fully biological.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Thursday, October 17, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 78 yet more FTL (Faster than Light)
17 October 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 78 yet more FTL (Faster than Light)
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Remember, there is a limit (as far as we know) at the speed of light. If you don't understand this and e=mc^2, you definitely need to do some studying. Don't even begin to write science fiction about FTL if you don't understand why we need to talk about FTL at all.
Since the speed of light is a limit, you need to discover a means to move within the galaxy that doesn't depend on the speed of light. In my novels, I progress from FTL that is a single transition in null space to systems that shutter in and out of null space. In the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox and The Ghost Ship Chronicles, the method of FTL is through null space. Null space is the straight line distance between systems. The assumption is that null space allows travel through the gravity waves that fold space. The Chronicles don't go into as much detail on the operations as the mechanism. Ghost Ship goes in depth about the operations and not so much the mechanism. Null space allows relatively quick travel between solar systems. In Ghost Ship, the travel has progressed to shutter null drive. The ships move in and out of null space at specific intervals. In both series, the transition through null space requires special training and individuals. In Ghost Ship, I go into detail on the methods and training.
If you are moving inter-solar system relatively quickly, for your universe, you need to develop some means of FTL. The means needs to fit some known or unknown extrapolation. Warp drive won't cut it.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Remember, there is a limit (as far as we know) at the speed of light. If you don't understand this and e=mc^2, you definitely need to do some studying. Don't even begin to write science fiction about FTL if you don't understand why we need to talk about FTL at all.
Since the speed of light is a limit, you need to discover a means to move within the galaxy that doesn't depend on the speed of light. In my novels, I progress from FTL that is a single transition in null space to systems that shutter in and out of null space. In the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox and The Ghost Ship Chronicles, the method of FTL is through null space. Null space is the straight line distance between systems. The assumption is that null space allows travel through the gravity waves that fold space. The Chronicles don't go into as much detail on the operations as the mechanism. Ghost Ship goes in depth about the operations and not so much the mechanism. Null space allows relatively quick travel between solar systems. In Ghost Ship, the travel has progressed to shutter null drive. The ships move in and out of null space at specific intervals. In both series, the transition through null space requires special training and individuals. In Ghost Ship, I go into detail on the methods and training.
If you are moving inter-solar system relatively quickly, for your universe, you need to develop some means of FTL. The means needs to fit some known or unknown extrapolation. Warp drive won't cut it.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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Wednesday, October 16, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 77 more FTL (Faster than Light)
16 October 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 77 more FTL (Faster than Light)
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
When we are talking about 1,000 o 10,000 years in the future, we can extrapolate the possibility of FTL travel. The methods can be varied, but they are generally based on the same concept--gravity folds. Science fiction writers have proposed various methods to get around the limits of the speed of light. If you don't know that the speed of light is a physical limit, then you really need to get studying. In the 100 to 1,000 year extrapolation, it can be expected that travel between solar systems is difficult and accomplished at non-FTL speeds. This means it will take about 5 years at near light speed to get to the closest solar system (from earth). A portion of the travel will be accelerating out to near light speed and decelerating back from near light speed. You need to do the math yourself--it isn't difficult. If you can't do the math, you really shouldn't be writing science fiction.
There are various methods of FTL travel that have been suggested. I'll get to that tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
When we are talking about 1,000 o 10,000 years in the future, we can extrapolate the possibility of FTL travel. The methods can be varied, but they are generally based on the same concept--gravity folds. Science fiction writers have proposed various methods to get around the limits of the speed of light. If you don't know that the speed of light is a physical limit, then you really need to get studying. In the 100 to 1,000 year extrapolation, it can be expected that travel between solar systems is difficult and accomplished at non-FTL speeds. This means it will take about 5 years at near light speed to get to the closest solar system (from earth). A portion of the travel will be accelerating out to near light speed and decelerating back from near light speed. You need to do the math yourself--it isn't difficult. If you can't do the math, you really shouldn't be writing science fiction.
There are various methods of FTL travel that have been suggested. I'll get to that tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Thursday, October 10, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 71 more Transportation
10 October 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 71 more Transportation
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Trains are the first level of technology for powered transportation. Trains can't really used independently. Trains require much land and resources. These resources were available to individuals in the 1800s such that they could build and develop entire rail and railroad lines. Today, regulations and government restrictions would likely make rail impossible--except under government control. The problem of government interference in new technology is an age-old problem. It does not improve service or cost--just look at AMTRAK in the USA. Although there were individuals who did own their own trains and train cars, rail transportation lends itself to mass transportation. Without government interference, transportation, indeed, all technologies, will move toward the individual.
It shouldn't surprise us that the automobile grew up quickly to compete against rail transportation. It should not be surprising at all that individual transportation is the mechanism (all technologies move toward the individual) of the future for ground based transportation. When people assert government or corporate dominance to try to force people from individual transportation toward mass transportation, they are working against history, freedom, and the most basic desires of people. We should expect this trend to continue in transportation.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
Trains are the first level of technology for powered transportation. Trains can't really used independently. Trains require much land and resources. These resources were available to individuals in the 1800s such that they could build and develop entire rail and railroad lines. Today, regulations and government restrictions would likely make rail impossible--except under government control. The problem of government interference in new technology is an age-old problem. It does not improve service or cost--just look at AMTRAK in the USA. Although there were individuals who did own their own trains and train cars, rail transportation lends itself to mass transportation. Without government interference, transportation, indeed, all technologies, will move toward the individual.
It shouldn't surprise us that the automobile grew up quickly to compete against rail transportation. It should not be surprising at all that individual transportation is the mechanism (all technologies move toward the individual) of the future for ground based transportation. When people assert government or corporate dominance to try to force people from individual transportation toward mass transportation, they are working against history, freedom, and the most basic desires of people. We should expect this trend to continue in transportation.
More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Tuesday, October 8, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 69 yet more Medical Extrapolation
8 October 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 69 yet more Medical Extrapolation
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The use of medical technology in The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox and in The Ghost Ship Chronicles is a direct example of technological and cultural shaping. The expectation in medical technology is that implantable chips that interact with the brain and brain stem will be in the near future. Near future is 100 years. They will be available in at least 1000 years.
In future technology, the question is rarely if it is almost always when. The answer is in the hands of the author. You must use the extrapolation of science to create your science fiction universe. You also need to explain the why and wherefores of the timing of the technology. The example I gave from my novels was genetic manipulation was outlawed as was human augmentation. The results of illegal augmentation is shown in The Ghost Ship Chronicles. The point here is that I explain why the obvious technology of human augmentation is not used in the universe of my novels. I could have taken the tact of illegal augmentation as the theme or plot, but I didn't. The culture I used in the novels was based first on Anglo-Saxon culture and second on a guild trading culture. The Anglo-Saxon culture is driven by honor and not criminality. The guild trading culture is based in mercantilism. Both are very strong ethical cultures. The cultures around The Ghost Ship Chronicles major culture are not so finicky, and they play in the novels in many ways.
So, you should recognize that with medical technology, we will likely have both augmentation (physical and mental) within 1000 years and genetic manipulation within about 100 years. There is much more such as the cloning of organs, body cloning, etc. etc. You should think about how medical technology will change and extrapolate it into the future--it certainly won't be what it is today. More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
The use of medical technology in The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox and in The Ghost Ship Chronicles is a direct example of technological and cultural shaping. The expectation in medical technology is that implantable chips that interact with the brain and brain stem will be in the near future. Near future is 100 years. They will be available in at least 1000 years.
In future technology, the question is rarely if it is almost always when. The answer is in the hands of the author. You must use the extrapolation of science to create your science fiction universe. You also need to explain the why and wherefores of the timing of the technology. The example I gave from my novels was genetic manipulation was outlawed as was human augmentation. The results of illegal augmentation is shown in The Ghost Ship Chronicles. The point here is that I explain why the obvious technology of human augmentation is not used in the universe of my novels. I could have taken the tact of illegal augmentation as the theme or plot, but I didn't. The culture I used in the novels was based first on Anglo-Saxon culture and second on a guild trading culture. The Anglo-Saxon culture is driven by honor and not criminality. The guild trading culture is based in mercantilism. Both are very strong ethical cultures. The cultures around The Ghost Ship Chronicles major culture are not so finicky, and they play in the novels in many ways.
So, you should recognize that with medical technology, we will likely have both augmentation (physical and mental) within 1000 years and genetic manipulation within about 100 years. There is much more such as the cloning of organs, body cloning, etc. etc. You should think about how medical technology will change and extrapolate it into the future--it certainly won't be what it is today. More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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Sunday, September 29, 2013
Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 60 more Transportation Science and Technology
29 September 2013, Writing Ideas - Writing Science Fiction, part 60 more Transportation Science and Technology
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
In technology, we always see a similar pattern since almost the beginning of time. First, comes the science. The Wright Brothers studied flight, built wings, practiced with gliders, designed an engine, built a wind tunnel, etc. before they put together all the science into the technology of flight. Technology, in this sense, is the application of science. The Wright Brothers did the science, then they applied it to build a flying vehicle.
Second, comes the early wealthy experimenters and owners. The airplane was originally envisioned only as a plaything for the rich. There were exhibitions, but most of the early effort was for entertainment. The military also took an interest and during the first opportunity, put aircraft to use in warfare. The development by the wealthy experimenters and the military resulted in the first airlines in the 1920s and 1930s. Notice that the technology went first to the rich and then the military. The result was then air transportation for the wealthy. Flight on airliners was too expensive for the average person. The next step, also propelled by war, was the creation of less expensive aircraft and the beginnings of mass individual transportation.
Unfortunately, government regulation has prevented the quick next steps in aviation--that is low cost individual aircraft. That will change. What I want you to note is that without the wealthy, generally technology will not flourish. You have to have someone who is willing to pay high prices for early high tech consumer products. You also need wealthy experimenters. This is very clear in computer technology. More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Announcement: My novels Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness are about to be published. I write this blog about 2 months prior to its publication. I just heard that the proofs will be here soon--likely before the end of the week. My publisher also wants to put the entire set of novels based on Aegypt on contract--that's 5 more novels for 8 total. They also want to put my other novels on contract. The release schedule should be one novel every 2 months. I'll keep you updated.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
I am writing about the extrapolation of science and technology to be able to write science fiction. I made the point that it is almost meaningless to try to fully extrapolate a universe (world) that is 10,000 years in the future (and maybe 1,000 years in the future) without applying some cultural and technological shaping.
By shaping the cultures of your science fiction universe, you can shape the science and technology that is extrapolated. Here is how I culturally shaped the universe of The Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox to make the 10,000 year extrapolation work.
In technology, we always see a similar pattern since almost the beginning of time. First, comes the science. The Wright Brothers studied flight, built wings, practiced with gliders, designed an engine, built a wind tunnel, etc. before they put together all the science into the technology of flight. Technology, in this sense, is the application of science. The Wright Brothers did the science, then they applied it to build a flying vehicle.
Second, comes the early wealthy experimenters and owners. The airplane was originally envisioned only as a plaything for the rich. There were exhibitions, but most of the early effort was for entertainment. The military also took an interest and during the first opportunity, put aircraft to use in warfare. The development by the wealthy experimenters and the military resulted in the first airlines in the 1920s and 1930s. Notice that the technology went first to the rich and then the military. The result was then air transportation for the wealthy. Flight on airliners was too expensive for the average person. The next step, also propelled by war, was the creation of less expensive aircraft and the beginnings of mass individual transportation.
Unfortunately, government regulation has prevented the quick next steps in aviation--that is low cost individual aircraft. That will change. What I want you to note is that without the wealthy, generally technology will not flourish. You have to have someone who is willing to pay high prices for early high tech consumer products. You also need wealthy experimenters. This is very clear in computer technology. More tomorrow.
Also remember, I'm trying to show you and give you examples of how to write a science fiction theme statement and turn it into a plot.
For more information, you can visit my author site http://www.ldalford.com/, and my individual novel websites:
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
A New Novel, Part 289 You Traded Your Future for This?
20 July 2011, A New Novel, Part 289 You Traded Your Future for This?
For those who haven’t been following this blog, let me introduce it a little. I am currently blogging my 21st novel that has the working title Daemon. The novel is about Aksinya, a sorceress, who, to save her family from the Bolsheviks, called and contracted the demon, Asmodeus. Her family was murdered anyway, and she fled with the demon from Russia to Austria.
Father Dobrushin and Aksinya have decided to marry so that they can get rid of the demon. They need to be married by contract in the church. They return to the Ecclesia for this reason. Father Makar doesn't give them a very warm welcome...
Ah, now we discover what Dobrushin truly gave up for Aksinya. Father Makar says it. He tells Aksinya that she should call Father Dobrushin simply Dobrushin or Herr Lopuhin. Father Dobrushin is no longer a priest. When he decided to defend Aksinya, Father Makar removed him from his position. Remember, I gave you all the evidence you needed. His beard had been cut and he wasn't wearing his collar. Aksinya should have caught on too, but she was not thinking about that at all--not until now.
Father Makar would not permit Dobrushin to defend Aksinya. He forbade Ekaterina to attend the trial. We get a little history of the Russian civil war--the Reds did indeed try to destroy the church.
Watch Aksinya. She is clinging to Dobrushin. This is more than ever her small attempt to hold her world together. She just learned of the sacrifice Dobrushin made for her. She clings to him because she doesn't know any other way to comfort another person. She clings to him because he is suddenly her only hope. You can't miss the fact that she is also his only hope--he has given up everything for her. Father Makar misinterprets Aksinya's actions. He sees only that she is insane. He can't understand her actions in any other way. Aksinya does show such signs, but it is the result of her decisions. She finally has someone she can cling to. This has been Aksinya's greatest desire from the beginning. She has put her love and attention completely on another person. Tomorrow, the question.
For those who haven’t been following this blog, let me introduce it a little. I am currently blogging my 21st novel that has the working title Daemon. The novel is about Aksinya, a sorceress, who, to save her family from the Bolsheviks, called and contracted the demon, Asmodeus. Her family was murdered anyway, and she fled with the demon from Russia to Austria.
Father Dobrushin and Aksinya have decided to marry so that they can get rid of the demon. They need to be married by contract in the church. They return to the Ecclesia for this reason. Father Makar doesn't give them a very warm welcome...
“Yes,” Aksinya still held to Father Dobrushin with one hand. She put her other arm around Ekaterina, “Father Dobrushin defended me. I am not going to prison.”
Father Makar sat at the table. He scowled at them, “You should call him Dobrushin or Herr Lopuhin.”
Aksinya asked, “Why?”
“Didn’t you note his beard, his clothing? He is no longer a priest because of you.”
“Because of me?”
“Dobrushin, didn’t you tell her. I can’t believe she is so slow. I would not permit Dobrushin to defend you in court. Because he opposed me, I took away his right to ordination in this Ecclesia. When I send my report to the Patriarch of the Church, he will likely not be ordained anywhere else.”
“You can do that?”
“Yes. I am his superior and an archpriest. I can make any decision I desire concerning his future in the Church.”
“He will never be a priest again?”
“Not likely unless the White Russians prevail. The Reds want to destroy the Church there.”
Dobrushin led Aksinya to her usual chair, “Sit, Princess.”
Aksinya would not let Dobrushin go. She held to him even as she sat and would not release his arm. He moved his chair closer to her so he could sit. Ekaterina placed a mug of hot dark tea before each of them. She sat down.
Father Makar squinted, “Look how she clings to you. Didn’t I tell you before, Dobrushin, she displays every indication of insanity? You traded your future for this,” he pointed at Aksinya.
Ah, now we discover what Dobrushin truly gave up for Aksinya. Father Makar says it. He tells Aksinya that she should call Father Dobrushin simply Dobrushin or Herr Lopuhin. Father Dobrushin is no longer a priest. When he decided to defend Aksinya, Father Makar removed him from his position. Remember, I gave you all the evidence you needed. His beard had been cut and he wasn't wearing his collar. Aksinya should have caught on too, but she was not thinking about that at all--not until now.
Father Makar would not permit Dobrushin to defend Aksinya. He forbade Ekaterina to attend the trial. We get a little history of the Russian civil war--the Reds did indeed try to destroy the church.
Watch Aksinya. She is clinging to Dobrushin. This is more than ever her small attempt to hold her world together. She just learned of the sacrifice Dobrushin made for her. She clings to him because she doesn't know any other way to comfort another person. She clings to him because he is suddenly her only hope. You can't miss the fact that she is also his only hope--he has given up everything for her. Father Makar misinterprets Aksinya's actions. He sees only that she is insane. He can't understand her actions in any other way. Aksinya does show such signs, but it is the result of her decisions. She finally has someone she can cling to. This has been Aksinya's greatest desire from the beginning. She has put her love and attention completely on another person. Tomorrow, the question.
Sunday, March 6, 2011
A New Novel, Part 154 You Were Chosen
For those who haven’t been following this blog, let me introduce it a little. I am currently blogging my 21st novel that has the working title Daemon. The novel is about Aksinya, a sorceress, who, to save her family from the Bolsheviks, called and contracted the demon, Asmodeus. Her family was murdered anyway, and she fled with the demon from Russia to Austria.
Yesterday, I forgot to mention two important points in the conversation. The first is the comment about the tragic results of Russian stories. This was a foreshadowing before and a foreshadowing here. I'm certain you got that. The second was the Graf's question: "Are you pleased with him?" This was basically a refined way of saying: "Do you love him?" Aksinya's answer is not very encouraging: "He is pleasant to me." I really don't want you to miss this point. That's why I keep bringing it up (in the novel); does Akinsya appear like a woman in love? To the Graf, this point isn't really important, he isn't interested in love...
Aksinya took a small spoonful of the soup, it was a delicate consume of partridge and spices. She sipped her wine again and glanced over her glass at the Graf, “I would not wish Ernst to become dour.”
The Graf smiled, “Dour by working? How should he support a family otherwise?”
“I have spoken to him about this. In Russia, my father was always busy with the affairs of our county. I would expect Ernst to do the same.”
“Well said and good advice to him.” He turned toward Ernst, “Has this wise woman been so candid with you?”
“Yes, father,” Ernst’s voice sounded slightly strained.
“Then you should listen to her, and not become dour. What, dear Countess, do you think a young nobleman should be about? That is, to prepare his way in the world?”
Ernst scowled, “Father, this is much too candid a conversation for the table.”
“What do you think, Countess?”
“What do you wish Ernst to do to prepare himself? He told me he was in the military during the war.”
Graf von Taaffe frowned a little, “He was.”
“Were you not proud of him? I was.”
The Graf’s smile returned, “We have not been a military family for a long while. I was also proud of him, but I feared for his life. I could not stand to think I would lose him too.”
Aksinya’s face displayed her curiosity.
The Graf continued, “I lost his mother, and I do not wish to lose him. To me that is unthinkable.”
“Perhaps a little frivolity is owed to a man who is willing to protect that which he believes is important.”
The Graf puffed out his chest, “Well said, Countess. And well turned.” He raised his glass to Ernst, “Ernst, you have chosen well.”
Aksinya raised her glass and took a sip of wine, “Chosen?”
“Why, he has chosen to court you, Countess. If you are willing to defend and to admonish him, this is a very welcome thing to me. His mother would have done the same.”
Aksinya blushed, “You attribute too much to me, I think.”
The Graf only continued to smile.
The servants brought out the fish course next. Ernst was unusually silent. The main course followed the fish. Then the salad was followed by the cheese. Afterward, the Graf stood, “The gentlemen shall retire to the smoking room, and the ladies may retire to the parlor for dessert.”
Now, the Graf finally begins to get to his real point. You see this conversation is a very delicate inquiry into the thoughts of Aksinya. There is a give and take, but mostly gentle probing by the Graf. Aksinya is a natural at this, but she really doesn't have any agenda, the Graf does.
As before, Aksinya thinks a little before answering. The last point the Graf made was this: “Now, Ernst, I simply state the obvious. Although I understand very well why you might want to spend every evening entertaining the Countess, I do wish you to be as serious as she is about your future.” The Graf's point is about Ernst's (and Aksinya's) future. He is trying to get (shame) Ernst to face the future (with Aksinya). Look at Aksinya's answer, it is so coy and well thought out: “I would not wish Ernst to become dour.” The point here is that she would not want Ernst to change. We know why; she wants the luxuria. There is a second innuendo in her statement. For Ernst to become dour, the story would have to have a tragic end. We can guess the answer to that, but it is inconceivable in the current bright environment.
Aksinya's statement gives the Graf the opportunity to bring out the big guns. This was the point he wanted an opportunity to make since the beginning: “Dour by working? How should he support a family otherwise?” There it is. The Graf will refine and make this point more than once, but his point in inviting Aksinya to this party is to get Ernst to become responsible and begin to work so that Ernst can support a family (obviously with Aksinya as his wife).
Aksinya's response is to the point, but do you get the idea that she hasn't put everything together. She doesn't seem to get the idea that the Graf means her when it comes to family. Aksinya's advice is the same as that which she gave Ernst at their first dinner meeting. The Graf thinks Aksinya is working along with him. She is simply stating what to her is obvious. Ernst remembers his and Aksinya's conversation on this subject.
The Graf complement's Aksinya's statement and makes a nice turn in the conversation. The implication is that if Ernst accepts his responsibility then he will not become dour (there won't be a tragic ending). The Graf keeps pushing. He has enlisted Aksinya as his helper, and believes she will continue to support him. His question: "What, dear Countess, do you think a young nobleman should be about? That is, to prepare his way in the world?”
This angers Ernst, but the Graf continues. Aksinya isn't a pawn of anyone. We are not certain she fully grasps what the Graf is about. Her response supports Ernst. Remember back to their first dinner conversation. Aksinya was impressed with Ernst's participation in protecting his country. Aksinya was proud of this--we could guess that. Military service is indeed the major reason for the nobility. She was proud of him--his father was worried about him. Aksinya has turned the conversation. We are not certain if she did it on purpose because she didn't like where the Graf was taking it, or if it was accidental and based on just her peception of the conversation itself.
The turn brings up Ernst's mother. Since Aksinya is sitting in the seat reserved for Ernst's dead mother, the irony and depth of this statement can't be ignored. We learn that the Graf is likely overprotective of his son and that he loved his wife and loves Ernst very much. Aksinya's next statement is very ironic on many levels: “Perhaps a little frivolity is owed to a man who is willing to protect that which he believes is important.” Although Ernst participated in the war, he was only partially willing to protect Aksinya and her friends when they were about to be raped. His lack of action resulted in her making the great enchantment in the street. He stole her book. He has not been protecting Aksinya. We are not certain what is important to Ernst--other than frivolity. We know what is important to Aksinya and that is akin to frivolity. Still, the Graf doesn't understand the irony in Aksinya's words. She didn't say them or understand them to be ironic, we just know they are.
The Graf's response and Aksinya's reaction shows us how clueless Aksinya is. When the Graf raises his glass to her and Ernst, she thinks it is raised to Ernst alone; she takes a sip. She knows Ernst is courting her with the intention of marriage. That is obviously why he brought her to his father and that his father invited Aksinya to this party. She was chosen. Aksinya doesn't get it. Aksinya has proven to the Graf that she would make a perfect mate for Ernst. She is bright and polished. She defended him to his father. She admonished Ernst and admonished the Graf. In the eyes of both, Aksinya is perfect. She is a perfect noblewoman and a perfect choice as the next Gräfin (countess) von Taaffe. Aksinya kind of begins to understand what the conversation was about--her and Ernst's future. The Graf made his point, therefore, he smiles. You might wonder just what the Graf has prepared the atmosphere for. Tomorrow, dancing together.
Yesterday, I forgot to mention two important points in the conversation. The first is the comment about the tragic results of Russian stories. This was a foreshadowing before and a foreshadowing here. I'm certain you got that. The second was the Graf's question: "Are you pleased with him?" This was basically a refined way of saying: "Do you love him?" Aksinya's answer is not very encouraging: "He is pleasant to me." I really don't want you to miss this point. That's why I keep bringing it up (in the novel); does Akinsya appear like a woman in love? To the Graf, this point isn't really important, he isn't interested in love...
Aksinya took a small spoonful of the soup, it was a delicate consume of partridge and spices. She sipped her wine again and glanced over her glass at the Graf, “I would not wish Ernst to become dour.”
The Graf smiled, “Dour by working? How should he support a family otherwise?”
“I have spoken to him about this. In Russia, my father was always busy with the affairs of our county. I would expect Ernst to do the same.”
“Well said and good advice to him.” He turned toward Ernst, “Has this wise woman been so candid with you?”
“Yes, father,” Ernst’s voice sounded slightly strained.
“Then you should listen to her, and not become dour. What, dear Countess, do you think a young nobleman should be about? That is, to prepare his way in the world?”
Ernst scowled, “Father, this is much too candid a conversation for the table.”
“What do you think, Countess?”
“What do you wish Ernst to do to prepare himself? He told me he was in the military during the war.”
Graf von Taaffe frowned a little, “He was.”
“Were you not proud of him? I was.”
The Graf’s smile returned, “We have not been a military family for a long while. I was also proud of him, but I feared for his life. I could not stand to think I would lose him too.”
Aksinya’s face displayed her curiosity.
The Graf continued, “I lost his mother, and I do not wish to lose him. To me that is unthinkable.”
“Perhaps a little frivolity is owed to a man who is willing to protect that which he believes is important.”
The Graf puffed out his chest, “Well said, Countess. And well turned.” He raised his glass to Ernst, “Ernst, you have chosen well.”
Aksinya raised her glass and took a sip of wine, “Chosen?”
“Why, he has chosen to court you, Countess. If you are willing to defend and to admonish him, this is a very welcome thing to me. His mother would have done the same.”
Aksinya blushed, “You attribute too much to me, I think.”
The Graf only continued to smile.
The servants brought out the fish course next. Ernst was unusually silent. The main course followed the fish. Then the salad was followed by the cheese. Afterward, the Graf stood, “The gentlemen shall retire to the smoking room, and the ladies may retire to the parlor for dessert.”
Now, the Graf finally begins to get to his real point. You see this conversation is a very delicate inquiry into the thoughts of Aksinya. There is a give and take, but mostly gentle probing by the Graf. Aksinya is a natural at this, but she really doesn't have any agenda, the Graf does.
As before, Aksinya thinks a little before answering. The last point the Graf made was this: “Now, Ernst, I simply state the obvious. Although I understand very well why you might want to spend every evening entertaining the Countess, I do wish you to be as serious as she is about your future.” The Graf's point is about Ernst's (and Aksinya's) future. He is trying to get (shame) Ernst to face the future (with Aksinya). Look at Aksinya's answer, it is so coy and well thought out: “I would not wish Ernst to become dour.” The point here is that she would not want Ernst to change. We know why; she wants the luxuria. There is a second innuendo in her statement. For Ernst to become dour, the story would have to have a tragic end. We can guess the answer to that, but it is inconceivable in the current bright environment.
Aksinya's statement gives the Graf the opportunity to bring out the big guns. This was the point he wanted an opportunity to make since the beginning: “Dour by working? How should he support a family otherwise?” There it is. The Graf will refine and make this point more than once, but his point in inviting Aksinya to this party is to get Ernst to become responsible and begin to work so that Ernst can support a family (obviously with Aksinya as his wife).
Aksinya's response is to the point, but do you get the idea that she hasn't put everything together. She doesn't seem to get the idea that the Graf means her when it comes to family. Aksinya's advice is the same as that which she gave Ernst at their first dinner meeting. The Graf thinks Aksinya is working along with him. She is simply stating what to her is obvious. Ernst remembers his and Aksinya's conversation on this subject.
The Graf complement's Aksinya's statement and makes a nice turn in the conversation. The implication is that if Ernst accepts his responsibility then he will not become dour (there won't be a tragic ending). The Graf keeps pushing. He has enlisted Aksinya as his helper, and believes she will continue to support him. His question: "What, dear Countess, do you think a young nobleman should be about? That is, to prepare his way in the world?”
This angers Ernst, but the Graf continues. Aksinya isn't a pawn of anyone. We are not certain she fully grasps what the Graf is about. Her response supports Ernst. Remember back to their first dinner conversation. Aksinya was impressed with Ernst's participation in protecting his country. Aksinya was proud of this--we could guess that. Military service is indeed the major reason for the nobility. She was proud of him--his father was worried about him. Aksinya has turned the conversation. We are not certain if she did it on purpose because she didn't like where the Graf was taking it, or if it was accidental and based on just her peception of the conversation itself.
The turn brings up Ernst's mother. Since Aksinya is sitting in the seat reserved for Ernst's dead mother, the irony and depth of this statement can't be ignored. We learn that the Graf is likely overprotective of his son and that he loved his wife and loves Ernst very much. Aksinya's next statement is very ironic on many levels: “Perhaps a little frivolity is owed to a man who is willing to protect that which he believes is important.” Although Ernst participated in the war, he was only partially willing to protect Aksinya and her friends when they were about to be raped. His lack of action resulted in her making the great enchantment in the street. He stole her book. He has not been protecting Aksinya. We are not certain what is important to Ernst--other than frivolity. We know what is important to Aksinya and that is akin to frivolity. Still, the Graf doesn't understand the irony in Aksinya's words. She didn't say them or understand them to be ironic, we just know they are.
The Graf's response and Aksinya's reaction shows us how clueless Aksinya is. When the Graf raises his glass to her and Ernst, she thinks it is raised to Ernst alone; she takes a sip. She knows Ernst is courting her with the intention of marriage. That is obviously why he brought her to his father and that his father invited Aksinya to this party. She was chosen. Aksinya doesn't get it. Aksinya has proven to the Graf that she would make a perfect mate for Ernst. She is bright and polished. She defended him to his father. She admonished Ernst and admonished the Graf. In the eyes of both, Aksinya is perfect. She is a perfect noblewoman and a perfect choice as the next Gräfin (countess) von Taaffe. Aksinya kind of begins to understand what the conversation was about--her and Ernst's future. The Graf made his point, therefore, he smiles. You might wonder just what the Graf has prepared the atmosphere for. Tomorrow, dancing together.
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Thursday, September 23, 2010
Writing Science Fiction, part 2 Science
I do science, and you can't take the science out of science fiction. If you do, you no longer have science fiction. You might ask, can't I write about the future without worrying about science. The simple answer is no. Recently, I wrote that you have to immerse your readers into the world of your writing. The world of the future is a world defined by technology. If you can predict technology, you can predict the future. You can tell what the world will look like. The biggest problem is that most science fiction writers never got the future very right. A few, like John Brunner, predicted what the world might look like, but most weren't even close. Asimov, Clark, and Heinlein still had their galaxy roaming characters using slide rules when computers were a reality. Talk about missing the point of computers, but when computers fill a room, I guess it is hard to see what they might become. I mentioned yesterday, you have to extrapolate to write science fiction. You have to be able to predict what future technology will look like and build a world based on that future technology. You can't write science fiction without the science, and you can't begin to think about the future without thinking about technology. So, to be a good science fiction writer, you need to know a lot about science. Did you hear me. It does no good to be ignorant about advanced science and try to write science fiction. You will fail every time. No one expects a science fiction writer to get the nuances of future science perfectly right, but don't you see, knowledge of science is the basis for science fiction--you can't extrapolate from a position of ignorance. This means that if you want to write science fiction, you better start studying. That's the rub, by the way. I meet all kinds of people who think they want to write historical fiction, but they haven't and they will not spend the years of study required to know the world they want to write about. On the other hand, many who want to write science fiction, think they can simply pick up a pen and write any old piece about the future and magically, that is science fiction. No pain. No work. Just a story about the future and it is magically science fiction. I would like to let you know, there is more work involved in studying to develop the world of a science fiction novel than any piece of historical fiction. You have to build enough knowledge to extrapolate the future. To do that requires you to know a lot about science in the the past. Your extrapolation is only as good as the data that makes up your basis. The line you build your extrapolation from must be well grounded. The grounding is in the past--the science of the past. If you can understand how the technology got to the point it is today, then and only then can you begin to extrapolate a future world. Tomorrow, the how in building a basis for extrapolation.
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