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Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Development - Creativity

4 September 2012, Development -  Creativity

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my rules of writing:

1. Entertain your readers.
2. Don't confuse your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

Creativity is work and not an act of divine providence, random fate, or abstract accident. Creativity is hard work that is equal to the effort expended on it.  If you wish to write (or be creative in any way): study, put lots of effort into it, and work hard at it. 

The question then is how do you work at creativity?  I think there are three parts to creativity: inherent creativity, learned creativity, and fostered creativity. 

Inherent creativity is what you were born with.  I think this is very simple.  Part of creativity is the mental makeup of the mind, just as athletic skills are the physical makeup of the body.  Some people have an advantage physically because they received the right genes and physical makeup.  Just as some people didn't, or worse, some people are physically or mentally handicapped from birth, some people just never received the creative spark.  Fortunately, I rarely find people who want to be creative who do not have the basic skills to be creative.  That is, if a person wishes to be creative, that usually indicates they have the mental skills to be creative.

Let's continue the example of an athlete.  Many athletes don't have the physical skills and ability to be Olympic contenders or professionals, but they still have athletic skills.  The most average human can apply learned and fostered athleticism to improve and succeed where others fail.  Athletics isn't the most perfect example because those without the advantage of high genetic perfection (for physical skills) will likely not be able to compete at a very high level.  Mental skills and capability can be improved to a much greater degree than physical skills.

Creativity has a component that is inherent, but if you desire to be creative--that means you likely already have the spark and capability.  The problem then is fostering the capability.  That's where fostered and learned creativity come into play.  More tomorrow.

The following is a question asked by one of my readers. I'm going to address this over time: Please elaborate on scene, theme, plot, character development in a new novel creation....ie, the framework, the development, order if operation, the level of detail, guidelines, rule of thumb, tricks, traps and techniques. To what extent do you outline the historic context, culture, mannerism, speech, dress and thought process of the main characters, in a historic novel...in order to maintain integrity, and gradually (help) reveal attributes of a character in the story, or otherwise clarify the plot, scene, transition, tension or resolution?

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonorhttp://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Development - an example of a less than Classical First Scene

1 May 2012, Development - an example of a less than Classical First Scene

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

If you haven't guessed yet, I've left this up because I plan to use it in the future as we move through development. The steps in making and using a character in a novel are as follows:

1. Development of the character (history, description, personality, etc.)
2. Revelation of the character (within the novel, show don't tell)
      a. Description of the character - introduction
      b. Voice of the character
      c. Continuing revelation by showing

In a classical plot (and in most of my novels) you have a protagonist, an antagonist, and a protagonist's helper. If you develop these three characters for a novel, the plot will naturally fall out of the development of the characters.

Since I'm showing examples from a classical standpoint, I might as well continue with this theme.  My published novel, A Season of Honor, begins by introducing the protagonist in the first scene.  We don't meet the protagonist's helper until the second scene.  The first scene is not characterized by excitement.  There is some revelation and emotional action.  The novel begins at just the right point, but that point isn't as excitement filled as it should be.  The beginning of the novel could have been improved by either an action based point or by moving it to the second scene.

The action based point for the beginning might have been when the protagonist, Baron Shawn du Locke comes to the planet, Acier.  Still, I'm happy with the novel.  It is published and has a small following.  The novel builds very satisfactorily from the beginning to the end.  If you read this novel, you might agree, it would be difficult to begin anywhere else, but a strong beginning is important to any novel.
I'll explain more about tension and first scene development. I'll talk about characteristics that make a bad first scene/chapter eventually.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

Thursday, January 19, 2012

Publication - Your Press Releases

19 January 2012, Publication - Your Press Releases

Introduction: I realized that I need to introduce this blog a little. I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. The working title was Daemon, and this was my 21st novel. Over the last year, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here is the list of ideas for advertising--there are more and I'll add to the list as we go along.  I'm certainly not an expert in all these, but I've dabbled in all of them.  I'll try to relate my experience and the degree of that experience to you.

1.  Have a website for your novel.
2.  Write a blog.
3.  Advertise.
4.  Literary awards.
5.  Book cards.
6.  Contests.
7.  Interviews.
8.  Blog tours.
9.  Press releases.
10.  Speaking and teaching.
11.  e-mailing.
12.  Gifts.
13.  Book signings.
14.  Book trailers
15.  ...

You don't have to wait for your publisher to make a press release for you.  This is very important for indi writers and for other advertising.  There are a host of websites where you can put out free press releases.  I used to have them all in my computer, but I had a reinstall and lost them.  In any case, a little searching around the Internet will find these places to put out your press releases. 

How good of advertising does a press release give you?  Not that much.  As I've mentioned over and over, most news and interest is topical and not on novels.  Unless you are a best seller, and even then you have to be a million book seller, you won't get much, if any, attention for your novels.  Local press will usually give you some play; however, if you have a large newspaper in your city, they'll usually ignore you.  For some reason I can't fathom, the press is usually not willing to support other writers.  They'll give copy to one of their own who self produces and vanity publishes, but they will totally ignore a successful writer in their midst.  In fact, most large press newspapers will take the NY Times book page and reproduce it and never give a single letter to local authors (unless they are in the NYT book page).  They ignored a great author here until she won the Caldecott. 

I'll write about what to put in a press release tomorrow.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Publication - more Information, Recommended Covers

2 November 2011, Publication - more Information, Recommended Covers

Introduction: I realized that I need to introduce this blog a little.  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  The working title was Daemon, and this was my 21st novel.  Over the last year, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel.

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I'll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I'm showing you the marketing material I put together for a novel.

Today's Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select "production schedule," you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/

Here is the cover I designed for Aksinya.  I haven't sent it to my publisher yet because the novel isn't under contract.

You can see how this meets the request of my publisher in many ways.  I tried to pick the perfect picture that captures the feel of the book and it's main character.  I use this image for the novel's website.  This allows me to market the novel and have a cover design ready to go.

What you can expect back from your publisher is a recommended cover or two.  They will use a picture and they will embellish it with fancy fonts and clip artwork.  Like I mentioned, you can do the same.  The quality of the cover you get from your publisher will be outstanding.  They will produce a print ready cover much better than any you might be able to make.

If you really don't like their recommendation(s), tell them so and ask for more.  I've found all the designs from my publisher acceptable, but they are easy to work with.  Just don't begin to turn away every cover design and be willing to work with them.  If you reject a design, tell them why and give them some ideas.  Like I wrote, your publisher knows the market better than you do, but make sure you get a design you can live with.
 
Tomorrow, I'll tell you even more about the cover.

I'll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples:   http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites:  http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.