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Wednesday, October 10, 2018

Writing - part x642, Developing Skills, How to Suspend Disbelief, Plot and Entertainment

10 October 2018, Writing - part x642, Developing Skills, How to Suspend Disbelief, Plot and Entertainment

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Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:

1.      Design the initial scene
2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.       Research as required
b.      Develop the initial setting
c.       Develop the characters
d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5.      Write the climax scene
6.      Write the falling action scene(s)
7.      Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.  The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.  
Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective
Cover Proposal
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I finished my 29th novel, working title Detective.  I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter
How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

For novel 30:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

For novel 31:  TBD 

Here is the scene development outline:

1. Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
4. Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the release
6. Write the kicker
Today:  Suspension of disbelief is the characteristic of writing that pulls the reader into the world of the novel in such a way that the reader would rather face the world of the novel rather than the real world—at least while reading.  If this occurs while not reading, it is potentially a mental problem.  To achieve the suspension of disbelief your writing has to meet some basic criteria and contain some strong inspiration.  If you want to call the inspiration creativity, that works too.  Here is a list of the basic criteria to hope to achieve some degree of suspension of disbelief. 

1.      Reasonably written in standard English
2.      No glaring logical fallacies
3.      Reasoned worldview
4.      Creative and interesting topic
5.      A Plot
6.      Entertaining
7.      POV

Everything is about entertainment.  The purpose for all published novels is entertainment.  Other than this is the only point of fiction literature, one of the main reasons is that entertainment can fill a lot of holes as well as result in the suspension of disbelief.

The factors that do lend themselves to entertaining are these:
1.      Characters
2.      Plot
3.      Setting
4.      Topics
5.      Writing
6.      Use of figures of speech (vocabulary and language).

I think this is the time to move to plot in terms of entertainment and suspension of disbelief.  Some rake has stated that today only the plot matters.  I won’t agree with that at all, but when you have books like Harry Potty or the sparkly vampires, where the characters are not very entertaining at all and the only thing that holds the entertainment together is the plot, you wonder.

A strong plot will hold people in a strong suspension of disbelief—I’m certain you have read those novels.  You should know exactly what I’m writing about. 

In my opinion, the characters are the most important characteristic of any novel.  The characters are what drive the plot and especially the telic flaw which is the plot.  You can’t separate the plot from the characters at all, but you can have a great plot and terrible characters.  As I noted, we’ve all seen it.

The question, then, is how do we develop a great plot?  My immediate answer is to start with wonderful characters.  Okay, that isn’t a totally appropriate answer.  Let’s clarify the question with this: how do we come up with a great plot independent of the characters.  I’m tempted to write you can’t, but let’s try.

A great plot always comes out of a great telic flaw.  The telic flaw is always part of the protagonist, but let’s imagine we want to start with the telic flaw rather than with the protagonist.  If we start with a problem, we can develop a plot to resolve the problem.

With a problem (telic flaw), we can set it on the protagonist and develop the protagonist from the telic flaw.  So, what problems make great plots?

You can build up a plot from any basic problem idea.  For example, finding love, a mystery, an adventure, a travel, an exploration, a secret, an item, a place, and there are many others.  I like to add to that some kind of unusual circumstance, but that might be better called a setting element or just a setting.  For example, finding love with a sparkly vampire.  This provides almost everything you need to develop a plot.  This is usually where I put in something about a theme statement, but let’s continue to look at potential entertaining plots or plot ideas.

More tomorrow.

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