12 January 2020, Writing - part
xx101 Writing a Novel, Creativity is Writing
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but my primary
publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t succeed in the past business
and publishing environment. I'll keep you informed, but I need a new publisher. More
information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.
Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in
installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in
addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel
was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and
tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this
blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll
keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the
writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage
of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a
novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2.
Develop a theme statement (initial
setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3.
Write the initial scene (identify
the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.
Write the next scene(s) to the climax
(rising action)
5.
Write the climax scene
6.
Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose
Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around
dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working
title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining
idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea
with a theme statement. Since I’m
writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the
X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns
about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French
finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events.
Here
is the scene development outline:
1.
Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2.
Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3.
Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and
develop the tension and release.
4.
Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5.
Write the release
6.
Write the kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back
to the basics and just writing a novel?
I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel
together. We can start with developing
an idea then move into the details of the writing.
To
start a novel, I picture an initial scene.
I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of
an initial scene. I get the idea for an
initial scene from all kinds of sources.
To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial
scene.
1.
Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the
protagonist’s helper
2.
Action point in the plot
3.
Buildup to an exciting scene
4.
Indirect introduction of the
protagonist
Ideas. We need ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist
and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come
fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We
need to cultivate ideas.
First of all, if you are writing
novels, you need to read novels. The
first point of discovering ideas is to read, read the classics, and read what
you like.
Second, fill your mind with good
stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about. When I write good, I mean good. From a novel standpoint that would be great
novels and entertaining novels in your genre.
At the same time, I also mean good novels outside your genre.
Third, you need to know what will
build ideas in your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
Forth, it is all about study.
Fifth, teaching builds ideas.
Sixth—fill up your mind, then make
the catharsis.
Seventh – Write.
The development of ideas is based on
study and research, but it is also based on creativity. Creativity is the extrapolation of older
ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created
with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and
producing.
Creativity is a conscious act of the
mind. It is not an accident or
fate. People develop ideas because they
have put sometimes years of thought, sweat, and tears into their subject.
Creativity is writing and is caused
by writing. Writing is not creativity
decreasing as it is creativity increasing.
Why else do you think creative writing teachers, professors, and coaches
tell you to keep a journal?
Now, I’m not very enamored by most
creative writing teachers, professors, and coaches. If they have something really published for
which they received money, they might be qualified to teach creative writing to
people who want to be writers. If they
haven’t been paid for their writing, they are just hacks. You can’t expect any good teaching on writing
from anyone who hasn’t proven their skills by being published. Not self-published, but published. I think this is very important, but most
universities do not. I was inundated
with professors and instructors who were supposed to be experts, but their
expertise was only that a university was willing to hire them to teach
writing.
To be very clear, if you aren’t
published, how do we know you know how to write? Perhaps you could teach grammar to the
grammar unaware or writing styles (as in style guides) or perhaps you could
tell us what good books on writing tell us about writing, but I’m still
wary. There are many books about writing
that are not written by fiction writers.
Okay, enough of the soap box. You get my point. I literally didn’t not really learn much of
anything about fiction writing from my university writing training. It wasn’t a total waste of time because they
made you write, but it was not a very great learning time because it didn’t
tell me anything new. It was a checkmark
in the university requirements.
The best way to learn about writing,
especially if you don’t have acceptable teachers, is to write. Now what is an acceptable teacher? Very simply, you need to find an author who
has regularly published books, stories, articles, and papers. To be fair, many professional publications do
not pay in cash money, they pay in copy.
I’ll give that as credit. By the
way, copy means copies of the magazine.
In fact, most professional publications including peer reviewed scientific
publications pay in copy. For that
reason, if the teacher is teaching you how to write technical papers or short
stories, I’ll go for paid in copy. On
the other hand, books are not paid in copy.
After writing and having published
over seventy technical papers, actually being paid for a few commercial pieces,
having one novel partnered published, and six novels regularly published with
two more on contract when my publisher went out of business, I think I can
teach you about writing. I can also tell
you, I’m still learning. In my blogs, I try
to pass on to you what I have learned and what I am learning. At the same time, I’m still trying to get a
new publisher. It is very difficult to
find a new publisher especially if you are not the author of a best seller. I’m working hard trying to find a new
publisher.
The most important step in
creativity may be to just write. This
begins another chapter in this discussion of creativity—notes, records, and
documenting.
I need to get to the point of extrapolating
creativity, and also finish the thought about event horizon and worldview.
The beginning of creativity is study
and effort. We can use this to
extrapolate to creativity. In addition,
we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my
author site http://www.ldalford.com/,
and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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