1 June 2020, Writing - part xx242 Writing a Novel, Protagonists Plots and Theme Den Protania
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internet, but my primary publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t
succeed in the past business and publishing environment. I’ll keep you
informed, but I need a new publisher.
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Check out my novels—I think you’ll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire
novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the
commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained,
how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing
techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back
through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I’m using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I’ll
keep you informed along the way.
Today’s Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the
writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage
of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a
novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2.
Develop a theme statement (initial
setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3.
Write the initial scene (identify
the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.
Write the next scene(s) to the
climax (rising action)
5.
Write the climax scene
6.
Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart,
the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous
girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working
title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining
idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea
with a theme statement. Since I’m
writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the
X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns
about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French
finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events.
Here
is the scene development outline:
1.
Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2.
Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3.
Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and
develop the tension and release.
4.
Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5.
Write the release
6.
Write the kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back
to the basics and just writing a novel?
I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel
together. We can start with developing
an idea then move into the details of the writing.
To
start a novel, I picture an initial scene.
I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of
an initial scene. I get the idea for an
initial scene from all kinds of sources.
To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial
scene.
1.
Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the
protagonist’s helper
2.
Action point in the plot
3.
Buildup to an exciting scene
4.
Indirect introduction of the
protagonist
Ideas. We need ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist
and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come
fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We
need to cultivate ideas.
1.
Read novels.
2.
Fill your mind with good
stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about.
3.
Figure out what will build ideas in
your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
4.
Study.
5.
Teach.
6.
Make the catharsis.
7.
Write.
The development of ideas is based on
study and research, but it is also based on creativity. Creativity is the extrapolation of older
ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created
with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and
producing.
If we have filled our mind with all
kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative. Creativity means the extrapolation of older
ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. Literally, we are seeing the world in a new
way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way.
So, modern characters must look like
the reader’s impression of the protagonist.
This is an interesting problem as culture and society change as does the
impression of the readers.
Here is the list of characteristics
for great protagonists (this is based on the concept of a Romantic protagonist):
1.
Hero, independent, and
individualistic – characters who truly risk their lives for others.
2.
From the common ilk – as opposed to
the nobility and wealth.
3.
Educated – both seeking education
and study and loving to read and learn.
4.
Focus on the inner world of the protagonist
– the mind and motivation of the protagonist.
5.
Celebration of nature, beauty, and
imagination – the expression of the mind of the protagonist.
6.
Rejection of industrialization and
social convention – from urban to rural.
7.
Idealization of woman, children, and
rural life.
8.
Inclusion of supernatural or
mythological elements.
9.
Inclusion of historical elements.
10. Frequent use of personification.
11. Emphasis on individual experience of the sublime.
12. Discovery and skills—the protagonist finds his or her
special skills and abilities and uses them to resolve the telic flaw.
13. The readers agree with the mind (thoughts and decisions) of
the protagonist
I added the last statement, but
really this last statement is a direct reflection of 4, 11, and 12.
My ultimate point is that first I
develop a great protagonist and the plot and theme of the novel I want to write
comes directly out of that protagonist.
Every great protagonist comes with his or her own telic flaw.
Yesterday, I gave you an example of
Azure Rose from my novel, Blue Rose:
Enchantment and the Detective. I
showed how she was a Romantic protagonist and how she herself resulted in a
plot and theme for the novel. In other
words, I didn’t develop a plot or a theme first, I developed a great
protagonist and found the telic flaw, plot, and theme from her revelation. Azure Rose came with a plot and a theme. I’ve done this before and at the risk of
repeating myself, I’ll do this a couple of more times or more. Here is a list of my completed novels and
protagonists:
A Season of Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox III), published, Shawn du Locke
The Fox’s Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox II), published, Devon Rathenberg
The End of Honor (Chronicles of the Dragon and the Fox I), published, John-Mark
Antebellum,
not published, Heather Sybil Roberts
Aegypt, published,
Paul Bolong
Centurion,
published, Centurion Abenadar
Athelstan Cying,
not published, Den Protania
Twilight Lamb,
not published, Den Protania
Regia Anglorum,
not published, Nikita Protania
The Second Mission,
published, Alan Fisher
Sister of Light,
not published, Leora Bolang
Hestia: Enchantment of the Hearth, not published, Angela Matheson
Sister of Darkness,
not published, Leora Bolang
Shadow of Darkness,
not published, Lumière Bolang
Shadow of Light,
not published, Lumière Bolang
Children of Light and Darkness, not published, Kathrin McClellan
Warrior of Light,
not published, Daniel Long
Shadowed Vale,
not published, Nikita Protania
Warrior of Darkness,
not published, Klava Calloway
Dana-ana: Enchantment and the Maiden, not published, Byron Macintyre
Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon, not published, Aksinya
Khione: Enchantment and the Fox, not published, Khione
Valeska: Enchantment and the Vampire, not published, George Mardling
Lilly: Enchantment and the Computer, not published, Lilly
Escape from Freedom,
not published, Scott Phillips
Essie: Enchantment and the Aos Si, not published, Essie
Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse, not published, Shiggy
Deirdre: Enchantment and the School, not published, Deirdre Calloway
Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective, not published, Azure Rose
Twilight Lamb and
Athelstan Cying are currently not published. The protagonist of these novels is Den Protania. Den Protania is a pretty good example of how
a protagonist defines the telic flaw, plot, and theme. Although Den Protania is one of my early
protagonists, he was crafted before the novel.
Den Protania was developed from an
idea and a question. This was one of my
early novels when I was first learning how to write novels. I had this wonderful idea. What would happen if a person didn’t die and their
soul was roaming around some area ready to take over a person? Actually, it didn’t start with that. I imagined an initial scene where a large
Free Trader space ship encountered an ancient spaceship that contained an aware
being. That being was the soul who would
eventually become Den Protania.
This is getting complicated—all novels
and novel ideas should be complicated, or why write a 100,000 word novel to
show the revelation of the protagonist.
In any case, the being on the derelict ship is the soul of an ancient psionic
master. He was a hero in his own times
the period of the Human Galactic Empire from my Dragon and Fox novels, and
captured by the enemy. He was tortured
with a number of other psionic individuals who escaped and stole the derelict ship
which is called the Athelstan Cying.
Everyone except this one soul has been long gone from the universe. The Free Trader spaceship, Twilight Lamb discovers
the Athelstan Cying lost in open space and approaches it to salvage it. The Twilight Lamb uses a modern phase shift
drive while the Athelstan Cying used an ancient single shift drive. Many ancient spaceships were lost due to
drive accidents. The Athelstan Cying was
lost while attempting to escape their enemies and the crew died unable to shift
through hyperspace or reach a planet with its remaining fuel.
The Twilight Lamb intercepts the
Athelstan Cying to salvage the ship, but the Athelstan Cying has been left with
its defensive systems active and enough power to destroy the Twilight
Lamb. I should mention, the Twilight
Lamb is a ship filled with hundreds of Free Trader families. The being on the ship does everything in his
power to stop the defensive systems from firing—he succeeds. Meanwhile, a shuttle crew from the Twilight
Lamb, is poised to enter the Athelstan Cying.
That crew includes Den Protania.
Den is the captain’s son and a failure in this Free Trader family. He has a problem with taking responsibility
for his actions and with working to achieve.
This is the basis of the Free Trader system. He has tried two other apprenticeships and is
failing in Shuttle. Den Protania is one
of the Free Traders who enters the Athelstan Cying. Instead of following orders, he goes on his
own to the aft portion of the ship.
There, he opens a sealed cabin door and is expelled into space. He is caught on a sharp piece of the ship and
is dying. The being tries to save Den
and gets caught up in his body. Thus,
the being on the Athelstan Cying accidentally finds himself trapped in the body
of Den Protania. Of course there is more—this
is just the initial scene.
With this background, we have a very
experienced psionic master providing the mind and soul of Den Protania. No one should figure anything out except the
Free Traders have psi aware individuals on the crew. The character of Den Protania who is an
entirely new and self-aware person is trapped in the body of a never do well
who once was Den Protania. That’s the
basics of the protagonist. How about
looking at Den Protania as a Romantic protagonist.
The new Den Protania and the ancient
psionic master is a hero—the old Den is a wimp and a coward. This is a source of tension in the
novel. Den and his antecedent are both
independent and individualistic. Den, the
Captain’s son is not from the common ilk, he’s the Captain’s son and neither is
the being who takes over his body. This
doesn’t matter so much since Den is at zero and therefore the new being of Den
is at zero. They are at zero due to the
debt incurred by Den Protania for training and for the problems he’s caused the
Free Trader family. The new Den is
educated, the old Den isn’t educated enough.
Education is a main focus of the novel.
This novel can’t exist apart from
the inner world of the protagonist. This
novel is all about the mind and existence of the protagonist. The celebration of nature, beauty, and
imagination is a little more difficult in a science fiction novel, but nature,
beauty, and imagination are major part of the concepts in this novel for the
same reason as Nikita. The ships hold
closely to their small part of nature they provide for their families. This novel and the protagonist isn’t much
abought the idealization of woman, children, and rural life. It’s more along the lines of the equalization
of women children and the idealization of the technological. It’s science fiction.
The only historical elements come
out of my other novels, so no real connection there. If you imagine psi to be supernatural then
those elements exist. The psi is in all
of my later science fiction novels. Now
to the individual experience of the sublime.
This novel is all about physical, mental, and spiritual redemption. What else can you say about a protagonist who
is about to be kicked off his Free Trader ship being able to suddenly, with
great effort, change the course of history for this one person Den Protania and
make him successful as a human and as a Free Trader. The redemption of Den Protania comes from his
physical existence, his mental goodness, and his spiritual acceptance. This novel is indeed about the discovery of skills
and new capabilities. So, what about the
telic flaw, the plot, and the theme.
Well, the theme is all there, it’s
about success snatched from the fingers of great failure in a very odd and
powerful manner. The telic flaw isn’t as
obvious. The original Den Protania has
hurt many people. The new Den Protania
has the opportunity to help many people and to redeem the name of Den Protania. This encapsulates the plot—how to recover the
reputation and life of Den Protania.
Forgive the overcomplicated description, but I’m not sure how else I
could explain it. This novel started as
a question and an idea not as much a protagonist. It still show how a protagonist can define
the telic flaw, the plot, and the theme.
I hope you can see that the entire
plot, telic flaw, and theme came out of the development of this character. This is exactly what I mean when I write that
the plot, theme, and telic flaw comes directly out of the protagonist.
Ultimately, the point is that we
need to keep our readers content and pleased with our characters while
presenting the revelation of the protagonist and the plot.
The beginning of creativity is study
and effort. We can use this to
extrapolate to creativity. In addition,
we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my
author site http://www.ldalford.com/,
and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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