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Wednesday, January 4, 2017

Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 998, still more Tension and Release with Creative Elements in the Rising Action

4 January 2017, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part 998, still more Tension and Release with Creative Elements in the Rising Action
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with
I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement
I finished writing my 27th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  
Here is the cover proposal for Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse
Cover Proposal
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I’m also working on my 29th novel, working title School.
I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 
Scene development:
1.  Scene input (easy)
2.  Scene output (a little harder)
3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)
4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)
5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)
6.  Release (climax of creative elements)
How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.
For novel 28:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 29:  Sorcha, the abandoned child of an Unseelie and a human, secretly attends Wycombe Abbey girls’ school where she meets the problem child Deirdre and is redeemed.
These are the steps I use to write a novel:
1.      Design the initial scene
2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.       Research as required
b.      Develop the initial setting
c.       Develop the characters
d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5.      Write the climax scene
6.      Write the falling action scene(s)
7.      Write the dénouement scene
The next creative element is the punishment Deirdre was assigned.  Note the progression.  Each scene has a creative element that provides the tension and release in the scene.  Here is the outline for scene development again:
1.  Scene input (easy)
2.  Scene output (a little harder)
3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)
4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene)
5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)
6.  Release (climax of creative elements)
The creative element(s) are what make the scene exciting and entertaining.  They also need to drive the scene toward the ultimate climax of the novel.  Let’s look at creativity for a moment.  Some might think that creativity is found in the theme, plot, or storyline.  That somehow, the power of the creativity in a novel is all about the climax.  I completely disagree.  The main creative element in a novel is the element that defines the initial scene.  This is the most important scene.  You can have a terrible climax and falling action, but if your initial scene is great, you’ve sold a novel.  The climax doesn’t necessarily define the creativity of the novel, the creative elements in the scenes of the rising action define the creativity and the entertainment value of the novel. 
Think about this.  Would you rather read a novel that is boring in the initial scene and rising action with an entertaining climax, or would you rather read an entertaining initial scene with an entertaining rising action and a boring climax?  I know what I want—at least ninety percent of any novel is the rising action.  I love the rising action.  This is what excites and hooks me the most in any novel.  The way to create an entertaining rising action is through your scenes.  Each scene must have a strong creative element to build tension and provide release in the scene.  I don’t mean some of your scenes or only the good scenes—I mean every scene.  This is what I aim for and how I develop scenes.  I don’t write a scene without a good creative element.  I literally wrap the scene around the creative element.  Many times I use multiple creative elements to drive a scene.  I think I’ll give you an example next.  
More tomorrow.

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