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Monday, January 23, 2017

Writing Ideas - New Novel, part x17, Creative Elements in the Rising Action

23 January 2017, Writing Ideas - New Novel, part x17, Creative Elements in the Rising Action

Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but the publisher has delayed all their fiction output due to the economy.  I'll keep you informed.  More information can be found at  Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.

Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing website and select "production schedule," you will be sent to

The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:

1. Don't confuse your readers.

2. Entertain your readers.

3. Ground your readers in the writing.

4. Don't show (or tell) everything.

     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.

5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:

1.  The initial scene (the beginning)

2.  The rising action

3.  The climax

4.  The falling action

5.  The dénouement

I finished writing my 27th novel, working title, Claire, potential title Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse.  This might need some tweaking.  The theme statement is: Claire (Sorcha) Davis accepts Shiggy, a dangerous screw-up, into her Stela branch of the organization and rehabilitates her.  

Here is the cover proposal for Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse

Cover Proposal

The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I started writing my 28th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I’m also working on my 29th novel, working title School.

I'm an advocate of using the/a scene input/output method to drive the rising action--in fact, to write any novel. 

Scene development:

1.  Scene input (easy)

2.  Scene output (a little harder)

3.  Scene setting (basic stuff)

4.  Creativity (creative elements of the scene: transition from input to output focused on the telic flaw resolution)

5.  Tension (development of creative elements to build excitement)

6.  Release (climax of creative elements)


How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.


For novel 28:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.


For novel 29:  Sorcha, the abandoned child of an Unseelie and a human, secretly attends Wycombe Abbey girls’ school where she meets the problem child Deirdre and is redeemed.


These are the steps I use to write a novel:


1.      Design the initial scene

2.      Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)

a.       Research as required

b.      Develop the initial setting

c.       Develop the characters

d.      Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)

3.      Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)

4.      Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)

5.      Write the climax scene

6.      Write the falling action scene(s)

7.      Write the dénouement scene


Here is the beginning of the method from the outline:


1.      Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)

2.      Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)

3.      Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.

4.      Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.

5.      Write the release

6.      Write the kicker


In my world, creative elements are the key to writing entertaining scenes and ultimately entertaining novels.  If you notice, the telic flaw of the protagonist in this new novel, School, is a problem of Deirdre and not Sorcha.  The telic flaw can be and should be a creative element in itself.  In this case, the creative element that is the telic flaw has to do with Deirdre’s problem of fitting in.  Sorcha’s problem is the showcase creative element of the novel—she is a hidden student.  This creative element continues through the novel just like the telic flaw of the protagonist.  My point is this: you can and should have creative elements based on your characters that remain and are included in every scene in your novel.  This is a characteristic of the telic flaw, but that is always resolved at the climax.  Sorcha’s problem or creative element may or may not be resolved at all.  This is the characteristic of plain creative elements and not telic flaws.  Telic flaws are always resolved—creative elements don’t need to be resolved. 


This also indicates the power of creative elements.  They can follow characters, places, settings, things, ideas, and etc.  For example, the creative element of hidden and Sorcha follows Sorcha throughout the novel.  The concept of glamour (fae power), the fae, Unseelie, and poverty also follows with Sorcha—these are characteristics of her character as well as creative elements.  Notice also that these creative element connect Sorcha to other creative elements in the novel—the fae, the prison, other people not yet introduced, her foster family, and all.  Likewise, certain characteristics of Deirdre are also creative elements that follow her through the novel.  These are her birthright, her power, her knowledge of the fae, her knowledge of other things (those things she can’t even tell Sorcha in secret).  There are more, and I haven’t revealed all to you.  I’m keeping secrets because I haven’t written those parts of the novel, plus I want to build some tension and excitement—that’s a point in creative elements. 


There are further, developed creative elements.  I’ll explain those next.   


More tomorrow.

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