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Friday, February 14, 2020

Writing - part xx134 Writing a Novel, Art is not Common

14 February 2020, Writing - part xx134 Writing a Novel, Art is not Common

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Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning with

I'm using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll keep you informed along the way.

Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my writing websites
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
     4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:

1.     Design the initial scene
2.     Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.     Research as required
b.     Develop the initial setting
c.     Develop the characters
d.     Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
3.     Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.     Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
5.     Write the climax scene
6.     Write the falling action scene(s)
7.     Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.  The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.  
Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective
Cover Proposal
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja.  I finished my 29th novel, working title Detective.  I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter
How to begin a novel.  Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea.  I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement.  Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement.  Here is an initial cut.

For novel 30:  Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.

For novel 31:  Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events. 

Here is the scene development outline:

1. Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2. Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3. Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
4. Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5. Write the release
6. Write the kicker
Today:  Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a novel?  I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel together.  We can start with developing an idea then move into the details of the writing. 

To start a novel, I picture an initial scene.  I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial scene.  I get the idea for an initial scene from all kinds of sources.  To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene. 

1.     Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the protagonist’s helper
2.     Action point in the plot
3.     Buildup to an exciting scene
4.     Indirect introduction of the protagonist

Ideas.  We need ideas.  Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist and the telic flaw.  Ideas don’t come fully armed from the mind of Zeus.  We need to cultivate ideas. 

1.     Read novels. 
2.     Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about. 
3.     Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
4.     Study.
5.     Teach. 
6.     Make the catharsis. 
7.     Write.

The development of ideas is based on study and research, but it is also based on creativity.  Creativity is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form.  It is a reflection of something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect).  Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and producing.

If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative.  Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form.  Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way.  Let’s look at an example.

The writer must create like an artist with the manipulation of writing (language) in the world through hard work to present something that is not natural, common, or previously existing in the world, and adds beauty to the world and humanity.

Art is not common.  I guess I could write—if it were everywhere it can’t be art—so it is.  Common objects can’t be art.  Art is not natural and not common.  As I noted, art is hard work.  If you didn’t notice, I’m giving you the actual definition of art.  Many people, notably artists who want to sell you crap will tell you that you can’t define art or that art is in the eye of the beholder.  You know this is absolutely false.  Either people who are shady characters or intellectually disingenuous (or just uneducated) will tell you differently.  Art, like everything, must have a definition.  The definition can’t be art is what I think it is.  If this is true, then everything and nothing is art.

Art is not common.  In creativity, we need to look for the uncommon.  A regular wizard isn’t that interesting.  A wizard who is the messiah of all the wizards and who can defeat the ultimate boss bad wizard is uncommon.  That person makes a great and creative novel—Harry Potty if you didn’t get it.  There is more.

This is what makes romantic characters so important and interesting as protagonists.  Let’s be clear.  Everyone thinks they are uncommon.  Unfortunately, half the people you meet are below average, but everyone imagines they are above average.  This is an interesting illusion in human identity.  I think a much healthier view would be when everyone assumes they aren’t that special, but then they work hard to achieve what they can.  The problem with the assumption of being something special is they actually believe it and do nothing about it.

Look, creativity is hard work and uncommon.  If you aren’t working hard because you presume you have achieved, you aren’t worth anything to humanity.  Creativity is first hard and second uncommon.  Let’s look for the uncommon.

So, if I want to create, I need to look for the uncommon.  The common won’t do.  The common is too common.  The romantics assert their protagonists are the common man, but they are wrong.  Their protagonists are the common man who makes good.  The common man who takes their meager skills and turns them onto success.  Hard work accomplishes this.

You can do this.  Your protagonists can start as common, but you must make them anything but common as they develop their skills in your novel.  They start common, but become something powerfully noteworthy.  More like Luke Skywalker than Harry Potty.  More like Johnny Rico than Oliver Twist.  This is the process of art and creativity—taking the common and making it uncommon or taking the uncommon and wrapping it in an entertaining shell.  This is art in literature.     

Writing is hard work is the first step.  It is not natural or common and next, it is not previously existing.  

The beginning of creativity is study and effort.  We can use this to extrapolate to creativity.  In addition, we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.    
More tomorrow.

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