14 February 2020, Writing
- part xx134 Writing a Novel, Art is not Common
Announcement: Delay, my new novels can be seen on the internet, but my primary
publisher has gone out of business—they couldn’t succeed in the past business
and publishing environment. I'll keep you informed, but I need a new publisher. More
information can be found at www.ancientlight.com.
Check out my novels--I think you'll really enjoy them.
Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.
This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in
installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in
addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel
was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and
tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this
blog and read the entire novel beginning with http://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I'm using this novel as an example
of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I'll
keep you informed along the way.
Today's Blog: To see the steps in the publication process, visit my
writing websites http://www.sisteroflight.com/.
The four plus one basic rules I
employ when writing:
1. Don't confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the
writing.
4. Don't show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage
of the novel.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a
novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
1.
Design the initial scene
2.
Develop a theme statement (initial
setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
a.
Research as required
b.
Develop the initial setting
c.
Develop the characters
d.
Identify the telic flaw (internal
and external)
3.
Write the initial scene (identify
the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
4.
Write the next scene(s) to the
climax (rising action)
5.
Write the climax scene
6.
Write the falling action scene(s)
7.
Write the dénouement scene
I
finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential
title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose
Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around
dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue
Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
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Proposal
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The most important scene in any
novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising
action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working
title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working
title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working
title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining
idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea
with a theme statement. Since I’m
writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the
X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns
about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French
finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events.
Here
is the scene development outline:
1.
Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
2.
Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
3.
Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and
develop the tension and release.
4.
Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
5.
Write the release
6.
Write the kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back
to the basics and just writing a novel?
I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel
together. We can start with developing
an idea then move into the details of the writing.
To
start a novel, I picture an initial scene.
I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of
an initial scene. I get the idea for an
initial scene from all kinds of sources.
To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial
scene.
1.
Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the
protagonist’s helper
2.
Action point in the plot
3.
Buildup to an exciting scene
4.
Indirect introduction of the
protagonist
Ideas. We need ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist
and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come
fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We
need to cultivate ideas.
1.
Read novels.
2.
Fill your mind with good
stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about.
3.
Figure out what will build ideas in
your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
4.
Study.
5.
Teach.
6.
Make the catharsis.
7.
Write.
The development of ideas is based on
study and research, but it is also based on creativity. Creativity is the extrapolation of older
ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created
with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and
producing.
If we have filled our mind with all
kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative. Creativity means the extrapolation of older
ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. Literally, we are seeing the world in a new
way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way. Let’s look at an example.
The writer must create like an
artist with the manipulation of writing (language) in the world through hard
work to present something that is not natural, common, or previously existing
in the world, and adds beauty to the world and humanity.
Art is not common. I guess I could write—if it were everywhere
it can’t be art—so it is. Common objects
can’t be art. Art is not natural and not
common. As I noted, art is hard
work. If you didn’t notice, I’m giving
you the actual definition of art. Many
people, notably artists who want to sell you crap will tell you that you can’t
define art or that art is in the eye of the beholder. You know this is absolutely false. Either people who are shady characters or
intellectually disingenuous (or just uneducated) will tell you differently. Art, like everything, must have a
definition. The definition can’t be art
is what I think it is. If this is true,
then everything and nothing is art.
Art is not common. In creativity, we need to look for the
uncommon. A regular wizard isn’t that
interesting. A wizard who is the messiah
of all the wizards and who can defeat the ultimate boss bad wizard is
uncommon. That person makes a great and
creative novel—Harry Potty if you didn’t get it. There is more.
This is what makes romantic
characters so important and interesting as protagonists. Let’s be clear. Everyone thinks they are uncommon. Unfortunately, half the people you meet are
below average, but everyone imagines they are above average. This is an interesting illusion in human
identity. I think a much healthier view
would be when everyone assumes they aren’t that special, but then they work
hard to achieve what they can. The
problem with the assumption of being something special is they actually believe
it and do nothing about it.
Look, creativity is hard work and
uncommon. If you aren’t working hard
because you presume you have achieved, you aren’t worth anything to
humanity. Creativity is first hard and
second uncommon. Let’s look for the
uncommon.
So, if I want to create, I need to
look for the uncommon. The common won’t
do. The common is too common. The romantics assert their protagonists are
the common man, but they are wrong.
Their protagonists are the common man who makes good. The common man who takes their meager skills
and turns them onto success. Hard work
accomplishes this.
You can do this. Your protagonists can start as common, but you
must make them anything but common as they develop their skills in your
novel. They start common, but become
something powerfully noteworthy. More
like Luke Skywalker than Harry Potty.
More like Johnny Rico than Oliver Twist.
This is the process of art and creativity—taking the common and making
it uncommon or taking the uncommon and wrapping it in an entertaining
shell. This is art in literature.
Writing is hard work is the first
step. It is not natural or common and
next, it is not previously existing.
The beginning of creativity is study
and effort. We can use this to
extrapolate to creativity. In addition,
we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.
More
tomorrow.
For more information, you can visit my
author site http://www.ldalford.com/,
and my individual novel websites:
http://www.ancientlight.com/
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
http://www.aegyptnovel.com/
http://www.centurionnovel.com
http://www.thesecondmission.com/
http://www.theendofhonor.com/
http://www.thefoxshonor.com
http://www.aseasonofhonor.com
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